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EdIam
1/22/16, 4:32 AM
This is one of my absolute favorites of all time. If you didn't know, the seventh chapter is on mcstories. I'm hoping the author posts it over here sometime soon...and continues the story!
EdIam
1/22/16, 3:55 AM
;) Great comment.
SlaveBoy
1/22/16, 3:07 AM
Continue the story?
A San Francisco Reader
1/22/16, 2:23 AM
Just wondering : Alex has had twenty years to develop his intense hate for the Henderson family & obviously hasn't forgotten the visit John made to his house. Therefore can we guess that he hates John even more than the rest of the family & would really want to do a completely evil re-education of him ? It would be interesting to read what he put into John's mind & how John processes it. For example, Alex must hate the unconditional love & devotion John has always shown to JJ & Jake & want to destroy it completely. What better way than to make John reevaluate his love of his boy's, turning it inside-out, into outright 'dislike' & complete disinterest ! All this former love of family should now be placed on his one truly beloved son Alex. While John may not be a carbon copy of Bully JJ, his new feelings of disgust toward Jake should be similar..After all, wouldn't that be what Alex would want ? The 'new' John might even resent having a family & blame Maria for becoming pregnent with JJ & forcing him into marrage. In his new mind set, he could even realize that he was really a gay man forced into an unwanted marrage & two unwanted son's, etc.
Anonymous
1/22/16, 12:05 AM
It's got length, but it's also got some awesome hypnosis. If you like that (and the tags and the name give it away), you should love this story.
Anonymous
1/21/16, 11:18 PM
You've got length that's for certain. I'm all for fluffy love, I don't like all the abusive ones people are making, but your story is the exact opposite of what quite a few are now making. It's overly long, kinda chaste, and not super entertaining.
Anonymous
1/21/16, 10:38 PM
awesome story
Anonymous
1/21/16, 9:02 PM
Part 2 plzzzzzzzz!!!!!! One of my favorite stories here
Anonymous
1/21/16, 5:21 PM
All in all, solid story. Can't wait another to come. You are the most active and productive writer in the forum. Sorry, however, I prefer transformation to a drone-like mindless muscle jock, which a third person narrative better fits. I am impressed how good you can write with either style.
Anonymous
1/21/16, 5:09 PM
Love this one. It showed a great twist in the end. Wishes more smart-nerd-to-dumb-jock transformation to come. I personally love to see a protagonist gets aware of his change and consequences and tries to resists (but gives in in the end). Hope you try a nerd to football jock transformation as well.