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EdIam
1/22/16, 3:55 AM
;) Great comment.
SlaveBoy
1/22/16, 3:07 AM
Continue the story?
A San Francisco Reader
1/22/16, 2:23 AM
Just wondering : Alex has had twenty years to develop his intense hate for the Henderson family & obviously hasn't forgotten the visit John made to his house. Therefore can we guess that he hates John even more than the rest of the family & would really want to do a completely evil re-education of him ? It would be interesting to read what he put into John's mind & how John processes it. For example, Alex must hate the unconditional love & devotion John has always shown to JJ & Jake & want to destroy it completely. What better way than to make John reevaluate his love of his boy's, turning it inside-out, into outright 'dislike' & complete disinterest ! All this former love of family should now be placed on his one truly beloved son Alex. While John may not be a carbon copy of Bully JJ, his new feelings of disgust toward Jake should be similar..After all, wouldn't that be what Alex would want ? The 'new' John might even resent having a family & blame Maria for becoming pregnent with JJ & forcing him into marrage. In his new mind set, he could even realize that he was really a gay man forced into an unwanted marrage & two unwanted son's, etc.
Anonymous
1/22/16, 12:05 AM
It's got length, but it's also got some awesome hypnosis. If you like that (and the tags and the name give it away), you should love this story.
Anonymous
1/21/16, 11:18 PM
You've got length that's for certain. I'm all for fluffy love, I don't like all the abusive ones people are making, but your story is the exact opposite of what quite a few are now making. It's overly long, kinda chaste, and not super entertaining.
Anonymous
1/21/16, 10:38 PM
awesome story
Anonymous
1/21/16, 9:02 PM
Part 2 plzzzzzzzz!!!!!! One of my favorite stories here
Anonymous
1/21/16, 5:21 PM
All in all, solid story. Can't wait another to come. You are the most active and productive writer in the forum. Sorry, however, I prefer transformation to a drone-like mindless muscle jock, which a third person narrative better fits. I am impressed how good you can write with either style.
Anonymous
1/21/16, 5:09 PM
Love this one. It showed a great twist in the end. Wishes more smart-nerd-to-dumb-jock transformation to come. I personally love to see a protagonist gets aware of his change and consequences and tries to resists (but gives in in the end). Hope you try a nerd to football jock transformation as well.
Anonymous
1/21/16, 2:04 PM
This was very very normal...until it suddenly went a complete 180 in the end there.