Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/21/16, 5:21 PM
All in all, solid story. Can't wait another to come. You are the most active and productive writer in the forum. Sorry, however, I prefer transformation to a drone-like mindless muscle jock, which a third person narrative better fits. I am impressed how good you can write with either style.
Anonymous
1/21/16, 5:09 PM
Love this one. It showed a great twist in the end. Wishes more smart-nerd-to-dumb-jock transformation to come. I personally love to see a protagonist gets aware of his change and consequences and tries to resists (but gives in in the end). Hope you try a nerd to football jock transformation as well.
Anonymous
1/21/16, 2:04 PM
This was very very normal...until it suddenly went a complete 180 in the end there.
Willie Cici
1/21/16, 4:57 AM
I pick and choose different places throughout the country. There was no underlying reason why I chose UT.
Anonymous
1/21/16, 2:47 AM
i think it is the longest story i've ever read on this website(old and new ncmc). It's quite impressive only for that.
San Francisco Little guy :)
1/21/16, 2:06 AM
This is the only story on this site that I have read all the chapters at least three times !!! Hope the next few chapters come out ASAP !!!!
Anonymous
1/21/16, 12:11 AM
Officer Cockforbrains is too good/hot in his cluelessness Hope to see more of him (and maybe be clueless together with another cop?)
Anonymous
1/21/16, 12:09 AM
Looking forward to more Officer Cockforbrains in future installments. The cluelessness is great !
A SAN FRANCISCO READER & FAN
1/20/16, 10:27 PM
.....GO FOR BROKE, EDLAM !!! THOSE OF US WHO ARE 'BULLY-STORY-LOVERS' ARE WITH YOU 100%.....PLEASE LET ALEX CONTINUE HIS DELICIOUS EVIL WAYS....REMEMBER FOLKS, 'IT'S ONLY A PIECE OF FICTION & YOU'VE GOT 100'S OF 'HAPPY ENDING' STORIES: LET US 'SICKO'S' HAVE ONE FOR A CHANGE....THANK'S !!!
Anonymous
1/20/16, 10:20 PM
....Remember, Officer Cockforbrains already said he'd like the amazing Alex to 'talk' to the other officer's...so I'm guessing that if this series last's long enough, Alex will travel down to the station & re educate the entire town's police force into their new techniques.! Here's hoping this is one of those stories which lasts into the 20 or so chapter range as Alex continues to re educate: remember we still have his 'real father' & two disliked brothers, next door. For that matter, let's not forget this story takes place shortly before Christmas & Alex considers Christian's little more than a "cult"...would he dare to have the [now perverted] family take him to their church service & proceed to warp the mind's of everyone in attendance ??? I'm afraid this might be more than many 'God fearing' gay readers could take, but it would be radical for sure. [ As a long time reader, I'v never seen anything this un-politically correct here, & wonder if they would even publish it !!]