Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/21/16, 11:18 PM
You've got length that's for certain. I'm all for fluffy love, I don't like all the abusive ones people are making, but your story is the exact opposite of what quite a few are now making. It's overly long, kinda chaste, and not super entertaining.
Anonymous
1/21/16, 10:38 PM
awesome story
Anonymous
1/21/16, 9:02 PM
Part 2 plzzzzzzzz!!!!!! One of my favorite stories here
Anonymous
1/21/16, 5:21 PM
All in all, solid story. Can't wait another to come. You are the most active and productive writer in the forum. Sorry, however, I prefer transformation to a drone-like mindless muscle jock, which a third person narrative better fits. I am impressed how good you can write with either style.
Anonymous
1/21/16, 5:09 PM
Love this one. It showed a great twist in the end. Wishes more smart-nerd-to-dumb-jock transformation to come. I personally love to see a protagonist gets aware of his change and consequences and tries to resists (but gives in in the end). Hope you try a nerd to football jock transformation as well.
Anonymous
1/21/16, 2:04 PM
This was very very normal...until it suddenly went a complete 180 in the end there.
Willie Cici
1/21/16, 4:57 AM
I pick and choose different places throughout the country. There was no underlying reason why I chose UT.
Anonymous
1/21/16, 2:47 AM
i think it is the longest story i've ever read on this website(old and new ncmc). It's quite impressive only for that.
San Francisco Little guy :)
1/21/16, 2:06 AM
This is the only story on this site that I have read all the chapters at least three times !!! Hope the next few chapters come out ASAP !!!!
Anonymous
1/21/16, 12:11 AM
Officer Cockforbrains is too good/hot in his cluelessness Hope to see more of him (and maybe be clueless together with another cop?)