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Anonymous
1/20/16, 5:16 PM
ALEX HAS HAD ALMOST TWENTY YEARS TO HATE THIS FAMILY: IT'S TIME TO DESTROY THEM !...BRING-IT-ON !!!
Anonymous
1/20/16, 5:09 PM
All the 'love' & proud feelings that John had for his two son's should now be combined into his intense feelings for his 'new' son Alex..What does that leave for his former son's ? Not much, I'd guess & of course if Alex's lack of 'father/son' love & good relationship with his former dad is any indication, there shouldn't be much 'love' shown to John by his boy's ....Looking forward to the new family dynamic in chapter 8.
Anonymous
1/20/16, 2:31 PM
As someone who attends UT, I am curious why you write about it?
Anonymous
1/20/16, 1:19 PM
The New "Pygmalion" or, "My Fair Laddies"! They could have pumped all night....
Anonymous
1/20/16, 8:17 AM
More physical description of John would be nice :)
Anonymous
1/20/16, 4:56 AM
I hope John is now a 100% example of the worst possible 'father' & husband that Alex can think up. It would also be a good idea for Alex to remind JJ & Jake through a quick listen to the re-educator, to now have exactly a total 365 degree change in their former feelings toward their dad, just as Alex changed JJ's feelings toward his girlfriend.
Insignia
1/20/16, 3:37 AM
Phenomenal. Great read.
Anonymous
1/20/16, 3:03 AM
.....What about Alex's real father [Fred?] : This is the only father Alex ever knew..did he decide to give John any of his real father's less than perfect trait's, [ heavy drinking, weak willed, slob, etc ??]
Anonymous
1/20/16, 2:52 AM
Wait...there is a part 2? Where?
A SAN FRANCISCO READER & FAN
1/20/16, 2:31 AM
WOW !! THE 'NEW' JOHN, [HYPNOTIZED OR RE-EDUCATED] SURE SOUNDS 'SEXY'...CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. I ALSO NOTICED HE'S NOW USING THE 'F' WORD & FEELING HIMSELF-UP. SOUNDS LIKE AN EXCITING IMPROVEMENT ! HERE'S HOPING WE GET SOME 'BACK-ROUND' AS TO WHAT SUGGESTIONS WERE PUT INTO HIS BRAIN & HOW HE PROCESSED IT IN HIS MIND..LOOKING FORWARD TO HIS NEW RELATIONSHIP TO HIS FAVORITE [THIRD SON] & HIS 'FILTHY QUEER' OF A SON AS WELL.....WHEN HE SAY'S "SON, I RAISED YOU BETTER THAN THAT", I HOPE WE FIND OUT WHAT HE NOW BELIEVES HAPPENED IN HIS FAMILY'S PAST....ALSO ALTHOUGH THIS IS A GAY ORIENTED STORY, I'M CURIOUS TO SEE HOW THE WIFE & SON'S GIRLFRIEND ARE HANDLED.......