Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/20/16, 4:56 AM
I hope John is now a 100% example of the worst possible 'father' & husband that Alex can think up. It would also be a good idea for Alex to remind JJ & Jake through a quick listen to the re-educator, to now have exactly a total 365 degree change in their former feelings toward their dad, just as Alex changed JJ's feelings toward his girlfriend.
Insignia
1/20/16, 3:37 AM
Phenomenal. Great read.
Anonymous
1/20/16, 3:03 AM
.....What about Alex's real father [Fred?] : This is the only father Alex ever knew..did he decide to give John any of his real father's less than perfect trait's, [ heavy drinking, weak willed, slob, etc ??]
Anonymous
1/20/16, 2:52 AM
Wait...there is a part 2? Where?
A SAN FRANCISCO READER & FAN
1/20/16, 2:31 AM
WOW !! THE 'NEW' JOHN, [HYPNOTIZED OR RE-EDUCATED] SURE SOUNDS 'SEXY'...CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. I ALSO NOTICED HE'S NOW USING THE 'F' WORD & FEELING HIMSELF-UP. SOUNDS LIKE AN EXCITING IMPROVEMENT ! HERE'S HOPING WE GET SOME 'BACK-ROUND' AS TO WHAT SUGGESTIONS WERE PUT INTO HIS BRAIN & HOW HE PROCESSED IT IN HIS MIND..LOOKING FORWARD TO HIS NEW RELATIONSHIP TO HIS FAVORITE [THIRD SON] & HIS 'FILTHY QUEER' OF A SON AS WELL.....WHEN HE SAY'S "SON, I RAISED YOU BETTER THAN THAT", I HOPE WE FIND OUT WHAT HE NOW BELIEVES HAPPENED IN HIS FAMILY'S PAST....ALSO ALTHOUGH THIS IS A GAY ORIENTED STORY, I'M CURIOUS TO SEE HOW THE WIFE & SON'S GIRLFRIEND ARE HANDLED.......
Anonymous
1/20/16, 12:21 AM
Why not just post part 2 on this site ? I tried to find it [through Google] & has no luck.....
bencoyotee
1/19/16, 11:42 AM
It's 4:00 a.m. ...I should be sleeping...I can not stop reading this fucking story.!! ,It so captivating.!
mw-scot
1/19/16, 11:35 AM
Love this story, and the way Zack is clueless to the changes. Part 2 was good as well. Any plans for a part 3?
Anonymous
1/19/16, 7:22 AM
I love the humiliation in this story...it's amazing!
Jam
1/19/16, 3:07 AM
I agree with BoonBoon, I don't like those sadistic evil masters. There are solutions that allow for strong power play without losing the moral compass, for example a master that himself is under duress, or perhaps has a really good reasons like trying to save the world. One of my favourites of this kind is CHIP OFF THE OLD BLOCK. Another great story is The Reluctant Slave that by the end of it you really can't hate the main evil antagonist.