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Anonymous
1/20/16, 1:19 PM
The New "Pygmalion" or, "My Fair Laddies"! They could have pumped all night....
Anonymous
1/20/16, 8:17 AM
More physical description of John would be nice :)
Anonymous
1/20/16, 4:56 AM
I hope John is now a 100% example of the worst possible 'father' & husband that Alex can think up. It would also be a good idea for Alex to remind JJ & Jake through a quick listen to the re-educator, to now have exactly a total 365 degree change in their former feelings toward their dad, just as Alex changed JJ's feelings toward his girlfriend.
Insignia
1/20/16, 3:37 AM
Phenomenal. Great read.
Anonymous
1/20/16, 3:03 AM
.....What about Alex's real father [Fred?] : This is the only father Alex ever knew..did he decide to give John any of his real father's less than perfect trait's, [ heavy drinking, weak willed, slob, etc ??]
Anonymous
1/20/16, 2:52 AM
Wait...there is a part 2? Where?
A SAN FRANCISCO READER & FAN
1/20/16, 2:31 AM
WOW !! THE 'NEW' JOHN, [HYPNOTIZED OR RE-EDUCATED] SURE SOUNDS 'SEXY'...CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. I ALSO NOTICED HE'S NOW USING THE 'F' WORD & FEELING HIMSELF-UP. SOUNDS LIKE AN EXCITING IMPROVEMENT ! HERE'S HOPING WE GET SOME 'BACK-ROUND' AS TO WHAT SUGGESTIONS WERE PUT INTO HIS BRAIN & HOW HE PROCESSED IT IN HIS MIND..LOOKING FORWARD TO HIS NEW RELATIONSHIP TO HIS FAVORITE [THIRD SON] & HIS 'FILTHY QUEER' OF A SON AS WELL.....WHEN HE SAY'S "SON, I RAISED YOU BETTER THAN THAT", I HOPE WE FIND OUT WHAT HE NOW BELIEVES HAPPENED IN HIS FAMILY'S PAST....ALSO ALTHOUGH THIS IS A GAY ORIENTED STORY, I'M CURIOUS TO SEE HOW THE WIFE & SON'S GIRLFRIEND ARE HANDLED.......
Anonymous
1/20/16, 12:21 AM
Why not just post part 2 on this site ? I tried to find it [through Google] & has no luck.....
bencoyotee
1/19/16, 11:42 AM
It's 4:00 a.m. ...I should be sleeping...I can not stop reading this fucking story.!! ,It so captivating.!
mw-scot
1/19/16, 11:35 AM
Love this story, and the way Zack is clueless to the changes. Part 2 was good as well. Any plans for a part 3?