Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/19/16, 7:22 AM
I love the humiliation in this story...it's amazing!
Jam
1/19/16, 3:07 AM
I agree with BoonBoon, I don't like those sadistic evil masters. There are solutions that allow for strong power play without losing the moral compass, for example a master that himself is under duress, or perhaps has a really good reasons like trying to save the world. One of my favourites of this kind is CHIP OFF THE OLD BLOCK. Another great story is The Reluctant Slave that by the end of it you really can't hate the main evil antagonist.
EdIam
1/19/16, 1:31 AM
Great comment!! I will say that I completely agree with you and I assure you, I have a plan as to where I'm headed. I don't start my story until I had thought of somewhere to go with it. It won't just fizzle out because I don't know where to take it. I have my plans laid out and I'll get there when as the story progresses. I can't definitely say how many chapters that will be, but I know what the climax and resolution will be down the road. So don't worry, I don't want it to just be sucking cock, gay sex, penis, penis, penis. I want the characters to matter, the changes and rationalizations to be described well, and the readers to feel like I didn't waste their time. I know I can't possibly satisfy everyone, but I know dang well that I'm going to at the very least satisfy myself. Thanks all of your well thought out comments and e-mails! I appreciate the passion with which so many of you care for my little past time here.
Anonymous
1/19/16, 1:06 AM
I loved it!
Jossa
1/19/16, 12:42 AM
This is my all time favourite story. It really made me discover some new kinks. Againstmywill, if you ever decide to extend one story, I hope it'll be this!
Anonymous
1/19/16, 12:28 AM
Hey Edlam - I'm the one who wrote (in a previous installment) that just having guys re-educated to suck cock gets fairly boring, and I feel you're getting close to that saturation point. I'd like to point out something else which has been bothering me. You've switched your point of view. The story began with the focus on Jake. You built him up with lots of background & context so that the reader identifies and sympathizes with him. But once Alex took over - Alex has become the focus of the story. Now that you've added Alex's backstory, Jake barely registers as anything meaningful. You've made it clear he has no thinking brain left, all he does is parrot what he's told. No doubt you're going to make his father also give him the filthy queer treatment. Maybe you have a way out of all this (paging Eric, and--dammit--don't forget those earplugs), but you've made your story so focused with so few alternatives to the inevitable re-education that I find it not only frustrating but leading nowhere. Another series on this site, "Pollination -the Series" is an example of a excellent author with a brilliant idea except that he couldn't figure out how to end it so he just stopped with an author's note. Very frustrating and unfulfilling. I hope that you are aware of painting yourself into a similar hole which I feel would ruin the entire story. (And frankly, I hope a deux ex machina happens, and a heavy tree branch falls on Alex, breaking his skull in two - and I'll happily read about all the blood and brains spilling out of such an unrewarding character.)
Anonymous
1/19/16, 12:23 AM
This chapter was just meh. The other chapters were great, but this one just didn't have the same affect
Axel
1/18/16, 11:55 PM
Just found this series a couple days ago and i got to say edlam i love it! I love how you detail and give everyone so much background. My favorite chapter was chapter 3 because of JJ's humiliation is there a chance alex is going to de-alpha JJ? He seemed to be so perfect i was hoping alex would humiliate him further. Just wonder cant wait to see how involved John and the Cop are going to be. Thanks for the great story edlam!
Anonymous
1/18/16, 10:38 PM
Hey Edlam, just keep writing your story and don't pay any inordinate attention to these comments. I for one think this latest chapter was fantastic and the only thing wrong with it is that I have to wait for chapter 8. Can't wait to explore "Daddy's" re-education and personally I find him being aware of how he was mindfucked super hot!
Anonymous
1/18/16, 9:42 PM
I know that chapter 7 was a 'transition' chapter to prepare the reader for lot's of 'sex' coming-up in chapter 8: but I hope you keep the sex scene's easy to follow, with four guy's [& the potential of #6, the cop] & not make a confusing orgy that's hard to follow...Please continue to explain the characters motivation for their actions & not just the regular 'run-of-the-mill' gay sex....LET'S NOT FORGET that every single man who has been 're-educated' still views homosexual sex from the totally perverted homophobic view-point of Alex...So their sex act's should be of the type that fall within the dirty 'mind-set' of the 'Gay haters' & anti gay bully's....