Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/20/16, 2:52 AM
Wait...there is a part 2? Where?
A SAN FRANCISCO READER & FAN
1/20/16, 2:31 AM
WOW !! THE 'NEW' JOHN, [HYPNOTIZED OR RE-EDUCATED] SURE SOUNDS 'SEXY'...CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. I ALSO NOTICED HE'S NOW USING THE 'F' WORD & FEELING HIMSELF-UP. SOUNDS LIKE AN EXCITING IMPROVEMENT ! HERE'S HOPING WE GET SOME 'BACK-ROUND' AS TO WHAT SUGGESTIONS WERE PUT INTO HIS BRAIN & HOW HE PROCESSED IT IN HIS MIND..LOOKING FORWARD TO HIS NEW RELATIONSHIP TO HIS FAVORITE [THIRD SON] & HIS 'FILTHY QUEER' OF A SON AS WELL.....WHEN HE SAY'S "SON, I RAISED YOU BETTER THAN THAT", I HOPE WE FIND OUT WHAT HE NOW BELIEVES HAPPENED IN HIS FAMILY'S PAST....ALSO ALTHOUGH THIS IS A GAY ORIENTED STORY, I'M CURIOUS TO SEE HOW THE WIFE & SON'S GIRLFRIEND ARE HANDLED.......
Anonymous
1/20/16, 12:21 AM
Why not just post part 2 on this site ? I tried to find it [through Google] & has no luck.....
bencoyotee
1/19/16, 11:42 AM
It's 4:00 a.m. ...I should be sleeping...I can not stop reading this fucking story.!! ,It so captivating.!
mw-scot
1/19/16, 11:35 AM
Love this story, and the way Zack is clueless to the changes. Part 2 was good as well. Any plans for a part 3?
Anonymous
1/19/16, 7:22 AM
I love the humiliation in this story...it's amazing!
Jam
1/19/16, 3:07 AM
I agree with BoonBoon, I don't like those sadistic evil masters. There are solutions that allow for strong power play without losing the moral compass, for example a master that himself is under duress, or perhaps has a really good reasons like trying to save the world. One of my favourites of this kind is CHIP OFF THE OLD BLOCK. Another great story is The Reluctant Slave that by the end of it you really can't hate the main evil antagonist.
EdIam
1/19/16, 1:31 AM
Great comment!! I will say that I completely agree with you and I assure you, I have a plan as to where I'm headed. I don't start my story until I had thought of somewhere to go with it. It won't just fizzle out because I don't know where to take it. I have my plans laid out and I'll get there when as the story progresses. I can't definitely say how many chapters that will be, but I know what the climax and resolution will be down the road. So don't worry, I don't want it to just be sucking cock, gay sex, penis, penis, penis. I want the characters to matter, the changes and rationalizations to be described well, and the readers to feel like I didn't waste their time. I know I can't possibly satisfy everyone, but I know dang well that I'm going to at the very least satisfy myself. Thanks all of your well thought out comments and e-mails! I appreciate the passion with which so many of you care for my little past time here.
Anonymous
1/19/16, 1:06 AM
I loved it!
Jossa
1/19/16, 12:42 AM
This is my all time favourite story. It really made me discover some new kinks. Againstmywill, if you ever decide to extend one story, I hope it'll be this!