Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/19/16, 12:23 AM
This chapter was just meh. The other chapters were great, but this one just didn't have the same affect
Axel
1/18/16, 11:55 PM
Just found this series a couple days ago and i got to say edlam i love it! I love how you detail and give everyone so much background. My favorite chapter was chapter 3 because of JJ's humiliation is there a chance alex is going to de-alpha JJ? He seemed to be so perfect i was hoping alex would humiliate him further. Just wonder cant wait to see how involved John and the Cop are going to be. Thanks for the great story edlam!
Anonymous
1/18/16, 10:38 PM
Hey Edlam, just keep writing your story and don't pay any inordinate attention to these comments. I for one think this latest chapter was fantastic and the only thing wrong with it is that I have to wait for chapter 8. Can't wait to explore "Daddy's" re-education and personally I find him being aware of how he was mindfucked super hot!
Anonymous
1/18/16, 9:42 PM
I know that chapter 7 was a 'transition' chapter to prepare the reader for lot's of 'sex' coming-up in chapter 8: but I hope you keep the sex scene's easy to follow, with four guy's [& the potential of #6, the cop] & not make a confusing orgy that's hard to follow...Please continue to explain the characters motivation for their actions & not just the regular 'run-of-the-mill' gay sex....LET'S NOT FORGET that every single man who has been 're-educated' still views homosexual sex from the totally perverted homophobic view-point of Alex...So their sex act's should be of the type that fall within the dirty 'mind-set' of the 'Gay haters' & anti gay bully's....
Feb 14, 2009
austin
1/18/16, 8:42 PM
i love this story!
Johan
1/18/16, 7:31 PM
I'm really looking forward to the 8 :) Thank you!!
EdIam
1/18/16, 2:43 PM
Don't worry! I understood what you meant completely. No need to apologize in the slightest.
EdIam
1/18/16, 2:42 PM
Hahaha, relax everyone! He knows for a reason. It's worded exactly as I wanted it to be. I hope to have Chapter 8 done ASAP, but it's my last semester of nursing school which means I'll be crazy busy. I'll do what I can to get the next chapter out there soon. I love how much passion you guys seem to have for this little series! It shall all be explained in due time!
FAITHFUL READER
1/18/16, 7:36 AM
HOW ABOUT LETTING THE READER KNOW THE 'JUST' OF WHAT JJ & ALEX RE EDUCATED JOHN ABOUT...ALSO DON'T UNDERSTAND WHY JOHN KNOWS HE WAS HYPNOTIZED. ISN'T THE POINT OF THE RE EDUCATION GIZMO TO RE ORDER A BROS BRAIN & THINKING SO HE'S A DIFFERENT GUY, BUT DOESN'T KNOW THAT THE RE EDUCATOR DID IT TO HIM, [THE EXCEPTION IS JJ BECAUSE HE TRUSTS ALEX & EVEN HE DOESN'T KNOW THE EXTENT OF HIS MENTAL TRANSFORMATION]..I THINK THE HYPNOTIC ANGLE IS A MISTAKE !
Anonymous
1/18/16, 5:27 AM
Hey, EdIam, I guess you must be a very charming person! Since your works are already TOO charming lol