Recent Comments

Feb 14, 2009
austin
1/18/16, 8:42 PM
i love this story!
Johan
1/18/16, 7:31 PM
I'm really looking forward to the 8 :) Thank you!!
EdIam
1/18/16, 2:43 PM
Don't worry! I understood what you meant completely. No need to apologize in the slightest.
EdIam
1/18/16, 2:42 PM
Hahaha, relax everyone! He knows for a reason. It's worded exactly as I wanted it to be. I hope to have Chapter 8 done ASAP, but it's my last semester of nursing school which means I'll be crazy busy. I'll do what I can to get the next chapter out there soon. I love how much passion you guys seem to have for this little series! It shall all be explained in due time!
FAITHFUL READER
1/18/16, 7:36 AM
HOW ABOUT LETTING THE READER KNOW THE 'JUST' OF WHAT JJ & ALEX RE EDUCATED JOHN ABOUT...ALSO DON'T UNDERSTAND WHY JOHN KNOWS HE WAS HYPNOTIZED. ISN'T THE POINT OF THE RE EDUCATION GIZMO TO RE ORDER A BROS BRAIN & THINKING SO HE'S A DIFFERENT GUY, BUT DOESN'T KNOW THAT THE RE EDUCATOR DID IT TO HIM, [THE EXCEPTION IS JJ BECAUSE HE TRUSTS ALEX & EVEN HE DOESN'T KNOW THE EXTENT OF HIS MENTAL TRANSFORMATION]..I THINK THE HYPNOTIC ANGLE IS A MISTAKE !
Anonymous
1/18/16, 5:27 AM
Hey, EdIam, I guess you must be a very charming person! Since your works are already TOO charming lol
Anonymous
1/18/16, 5:26 AM
Hi, tomozco! This is a great start! But I wonder whether Zeil only played with these two families these days... He is too unambitious! He needs more hunk slaves and more bare feet!!! lol
tomozco
1/18/16, 5:01 AM
Thanks for the comments! No, this is definitely not it! That's what I mean that it has become a much longer story than originally thought. I intended this "neighbour spinoff" to be just 1-2 chapters, but because of the mental struggles that the characters are going through, I gave more elaborate focus on the description of their changes. There is definitely more on the rest of the first day and other stuff as well, so stay tuned!
Anonymous
1/18/16, 4:42 AM
I'm sorry, English is not my first language and I'm still not familiar with many specific terms. I wanted to say "young" instead of "juvenile". I wanted to say young men, between the ages of 18 and 21, that is totally legal. Another mess by google translator, I'm deeply sorry.
Anonymous
1/18/16, 3:44 AM
Except not the juvenile offenders because they're juvenile.