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Anonymous
1/20/16, 12:21 AM
Why not just post part 2 on this site ? I tried to find it [through Google] & has no luck.....
bencoyotee
1/19/16, 11:42 AM
It's 4:00 a.m. ...I should be sleeping...I can not stop reading this fucking story.!! ,It so captivating.!
mw-scot
1/19/16, 11:35 AM
Love this story, and the way Zack is clueless to the changes. Part 2 was good as well. Any plans for a part 3?
Anonymous
1/19/16, 7:22 AM
I love the humiliation in this story...it's amazing!
Jam
1/19/16, 3:07 AM
I agree with BoonBoon, I don't like those sadistic evil masters. There are solutions that allow for strong power play without losing the moral compass, for example a master that himself is under duress, or perhaps has a really good reasons like trying to save the world. One of my favourites of this kind is CHIP OFF THE OLD BLOCK. Another great story is The Reluctant Slave that by the end of it you really can't hate the main evil antagonist.
EdIam
1/19/16, 1:31 AM
Great comment!! I will say that I completely agree with you and I assure you, I have a plan as to where I'm headed. I don't start my story until I had thought of somewhere to go with it. It won't just fizzle out because I don't know where to take it. I have my plans laid out and I'll get there when as the story progresses. I can't definitely say how many chapters that will be, but I know what the climax and resolution will be down the road. So don't worry, I don't want it to just be sucking cock, gay sex, penis, penis, penis. I want the characters to matter, the changes and rationalizations to be described well, and the readers to feel like I didn't waste their time. I know I can't possibly satisfy everyone, but I know dang well that I'm going to at the very least satisfy myself. Thanks all of your well thought out comments and e-mails! I appreciate the passion with which so many of you care for my little past time here.
Anonymous
1/19/16, 1:06 AM
I loved it!
Jossa
1/19/16, 12:42 AM
This is my all time favourite story. It really made me discover some new kinks. Againstmywill, if you ever decide to extend one story, I hope it'll be this!
Anonymous
1/19/16, 12:28 AM
Hey Edlam - I'm the one who wrote (in a previous installment) that just having guys re-educated to suck cock gets fairly boring, and I feel you're getting close to that saturation point. I'd like to point out something else which has been bothering me. You've switched your point of view. The story began with the focus on Jake. You built him up with lots of background & context so that the reader identifies and sympathizes with him. But once Alex took over - Alex has become the focus of the story. Now that you've added Alex's backstory, Jake barely registers as anything meaningful. You've made it clear he has no thinking brain left, all he does is parrot what he's told. No doubt you're going to make his father also give him the filthy queer treatment. Maybe you have a way out of all this (paging Eric, and--dammit--don't forget those earplugs), but you've made your story so focused with so few alternatives to the inevitable re-education that I find it not only frustrating but leading nowhere. Another series on this site, "Pollination -the Series" is an example of a excellent author with a brilliant idea except that he couldn't figure out how to end it so he just stopped with an author's note. Very frustrating and unfulfilling. I hope that you are aware of painting yourself into a similar hole which I feel would ruin the entire story. (And frankly, I hope a deux ex machina happens, and a heavy tree branch falls on Alex, breaking his skull in two - and I'll happily read about all the blood and brains spilling out of such an unrewarding character.)
Anonymous
1/19/16, 12:23 AM
This chapter was just meh. The other chapters were great, but this one just didn't have the same affect