Recent Comments

EdIam
1/18/16, 2:43 PM
Don't worry! I understood what you meant completely. No need to apologize in the slightest.
EdIam
1/18/16, 2:42 PM
Hahaha, relax everyone! He knows for a reason. It's worded exactly as I wanted it to be. I hope to have Chapter 8 done ASAP, but it's my last semester of nursing school which means I'll be crazy busy. I'll do what I can to get the next chapter out there soon. I love how much passion you guys seem to have for this little series! It shall all be explained in due time!
FAITHFUL READER
1/18/16, 7:36 AM
HOW ABOUT LETTING THE READER KNOW THE 'JUST' OF WHAT JJ & ALEX RE EDUCATED JOHN ABOUT...ALSO DON'T UNDERSTAND WHY JOHN KNOWS HE WAS HYPNOTIZED. ISN'T THE POINT OF THE RE EDUCATION GIZMO TO RE ORDER A BROS BRAIN & THINKING SO HE'S A DIFFERENT GUY, BUT DOESN'T KNOW THAT THE RE EDUCATOR DID IT TO HIM, [THE EXCEPTION IS JJ BECAUSE HE TRUSTS ALEX & EVEN HE DOESN'T KNOW THE EXTENT OF HIS MENTAL TRANSFORMATION]..I THINK THE HYPNOTIC ANGLE IS A MISTAKE !
Anonymous
1/18/16, 5:27 AM
Hey, EdIam, I guess you must be a very charming person! Since your works are already TOO charming lol
Anonymous
1/18/16, 5:26 AM
Hi, tomozco! This is a great start! But I wonder whether Zeil only played with these two families these days... He is too unambitious! He needs more hunk slaves and more bare feet!!! lol
tomozco
1/18/16, 5:01 AM
Thanks for the comments! No, this is definitely not it! That's what I mean that it has become a much longer story than originally thought. I intended this "neighbour spinoff" to be just 1-2 chapters, but because of the mental struggles that the characters are going through, I gave more elaborate focus on the description of their changes. There is definitely more on the rest of the first day and other stuff as well, so stay tuned!
Anonymous
1/18/16, 4:42 AM
I'm sorry, English is not my first language and I'm still not familiar with many specific terms. I wanted to say "young" instead of "juvenile". I wanted to say young men, between the ages of 18 and 21, that is totally legal. Another mess by google translator, I'm deeply sorry.
Anonymous
1/18/16, 3:44 AM
Except not the juvenile offenders because they're juvenile.
Anonymous
1/18/16, 3:32 AM
Thanks for all the details and character background you put into this story. Can't wait for Chapter 8!
Anonymous
1/18/16, 3:32 AM
Have you considered to make an spin off starred by Officer Cockforbrains? it doesn't have to be a long story with many chapters, but an interlude exploring his new twisted life as a perverted cocksucker would be VERY hot! Think about the possibilities! Alex could have added all kind of debasing orders as part as his job as cop during his time in the house. He could feel the duty to lick the boots of other men, pulling down his pants to make a search, be used as urinal for juvenile offenders, or be fingered by drunk men. I know this could be too much work right now, and I know there's a lot of readers that want to follow the main story (me included!) but I see a lot of possibilities here!