Recent Comments

EdIam
1/17/16, 3:18 PM
Eh, it's far more important to me to create a vivid picture of the person prior to their re-education. I look at this chapter to be similar to chapter 1 in which you really get the chance to understand Jake's personality and morality. Same with the beginning of chapter 3 in getting to know JJ. John is definitely a vital character for the story, so I want him to be pretty fleshed out prior to seeing him do the things he's going to be doing. Chapter 8 will mostly focus on John's new perspective and therefore will have more 'action'.
EdIam
1/17/16, 3:14 PM
Not mad at all! I don't feel much pressure to get the stories done at any pace other than my own. Besides, I don't want to rush a story and not get all the details in that I want. I'm very happy so many want the story so quickly...its just not feasible for me with as much going on as I do. I just want to reassure you all that I'm not going to abandon this story even when it may take a while for the next chapter. Thanks, all!
Johan
1/17/16, 1:57 PM
I'm kinda dissapointed :( Not actual action here...
Anonymous
1/17/16, 12:06 PM
oh my! poor dad! But those plots... I am REALLY looking forward to the next chapter! Those changes among these three family members! Please! So sexy! Daddy and his THREE sons! Let's have fun! Thanks, EdIam!
Anonymous
1/17/16, 11:47 AM
Love it! Love it! Love it! Daddy's home!
Anonymous
1/17/16, 11:29 AM
The Killerwhale Zeus story was "In Too Deep" which you can find some of without much googling.
Anonymous
1/17/16, 11:12 AM
Are you mad, master EdIam? If yes, please accept my sincere apology. Writing a novel should be fun, not a stress! Be nice to yourself, okay? Leave our hungry readers alone... We are just too hungry.
Anonymous
1/17/16, 11:10 AM
Well, it seems that it is not the end, right? I mean, we hope for the two families (Stantons and Zaid) to be together to be played by the main character!!! We need Chapter 8! Keep going!
jake
1/17/16, 10:32 AM
can you add more to it did the cops wear dress socks with their unifoms. my email address is jacobstone1980@gmail.com
Anonymous
1/17/16, 9:01 AM
Thank you! Edlam sorry for being pushy it's just I really love your stories! :D