Recent Comments

an 'interested' reader
1/17/16, 9:46 PM
....How come John knows he was under hypnosis ? Thought he was 're-educated' & his mind changed...NOT BY HYPNOSIS , which so many lesser stories rely on. Much prefer the authors former style of showing how the character's brain forms new memories & new reasons for their very different current behavior by being 'changed' to see things through Alex's [& now JJ's] perverted bullying view of the world, & although these characters are now 'gay' sexually, they still see other men as 'faggot's' , treating them in a totally homophobic manner..This is one of the 'politically incorrect' themes which makes the story so exciting & yet so different from the run-of-the-mill stories where we need approval for all our most perverse sexual desires...
Steve10185
1/17/16, 9:35 PM
Fun as always. Wouldn't mind actually hearing the re-educator commands given out loud, versus just seeing the results like the commands were given off screen. I always liked that aspect of the Love Him But series, watching the command first, then watching how the recipient processed it. Thanks for the series!
Anonymous
1/17/16, 9:28 PM
Wow, I can't wait to see how John NOW relates to Jake: If JJ & Alex put even half their bullying hatred of the 'Filthy Queer' into their re education of John, this should be quite something !! Here's also hoping that Alex put's some of his own Dad's 'fathering flaw's' into his 'new father'. After all, that's all he know's: Time for John to ask for a stiff drink ??? A mean, bullying Drunk seems right in order, doesn't it ??
anonymous reader
1/17/16, 9:18 PM
your characterization of the main hypnotist's character is superb! To be honest, his sense of morality and his character has made me think highly of him :D In this site, a moral hypnotist is a unique character, so I commend you for taking that route as well as keeping that route and story highly entertaining! Keep it up!
anon reader
1/17/16, 8:49 PM
While I admit that the descriptions here are better than "I love him, but" it seems I prefer that story over this, only because I really don't like bullies. But that's just me. I hope you continue your efforts in writing great stories! Though, I do wish Alex gets a dose of his own medicine :D
A San Francisco Reader
1/17/16, 8:08 PM
Thank goodness we finally have chapter 7...It's been a long wait & here's hoping #8 comes along sooner...I also enjoy all the build-up's to the characters re education, though I hope we get to hear some of what jj actually said to his dad, as well as what Alex added...[for example what makes John assume that there's a no clothes policy in the house ?]...also I hope we get to hear in Johns [new] own words what he now thinks of his 'new' third son & his other two boy's...Now that we know the 'deep love' he formally felt for his wife, it might also be interesting to hear how he now feels & relates to her......Really looking forward to the next chapter !!!
BoonBoon
1/17/16, 7:44 PM
Yay!!! Awesome as always!!! Man, this is fantastic, the next chapter will be the explosive! I like that you've left Mrs. Henderson and Vicky in the basement, I really hate to read about tortured women, even in fiction. I agree with you, Mr. Edlam, a detailed description of the character previous to the sex scene, helps to increase the sense of change and corruption. Is by far more interesting and hotter than a simply series of sex scenes. Darn, I'm wondering what you have in mind for John! I like the brief cameo of Officer Cockforbrains and how JJ and Alex made fun of him after he left. Will be a long wait for his return (preferably with his uniform matted with cum to his torso!)
Anonymous
1/17/16, 5:29 PM
I have to say, this was an interesting twist. Well done!
Anonymous
1/17/16, 3:49 PM
Hot story. Would you mind giving us an estimate on when the next chapter is coming up? I cant wait.
EdIam
1/17/16, 3:18 PM
Eh, it's far more important to me to create a vivid picture of the person prior to their re-education. I look at this chapter to be similar to chapter 1 in which you really get the chance to understand Jake's personality and morality. Same with the beginning of chapter 3 in getting to know JJ. John is definitely a vital character for the story, so I want him to be pretty fleshed out prior to seeing him do the things he's going to be doing. Chapter 8 will mostly focus on John's new perspective and therefore will have more 'action'.