Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/14/16, 1:43 AM
Wang ain't Japanese, that is Chinese
Anonymous
1/14/16, 1:21 AM
Enjoyed this story, but would have liked it even more if the body changes had been more extreme, including shrinking James penis as his butt increased in size & making him more fem., like his room mate...
Anonymous
1/14/16, 1:14 AM
I always liked the bubble series. I have to say that while I enjoyed the reveal of the professor I kind of wished that the boss guy actually got to keep his assistant as his boy, and maybe even gained the roomate as well rather than them going to the professor. But regardless, its incredibly hot! :)
Anonymous
1/14/16, 12:08 AM
Interesting!!! Can't wait for more! Some good writing, looking firward to more chapters
RE: D
1/14/16, 12:01 AM
Not very good descriptions, a tad disjointed, and an overall strange way to describe sweat. Not bad though, keep it up.
EdIam
1/13/16, 10:30 PM
Started school this week and trying, my friends!! Don't worry, I'm still working on it. It's quite a bit longer than previous chapters already. So hopefully you all think it will be worth the wait!
Anonymous
1/13/16, 8:24 PM
All in all, it's just an introduction. A promising start. Wish to learn whether Brad is under influence of a bigger plan or acts for his own. In any case, love to see Ed be molded to a more muscular, gym and cycle obsessed jock.
Anonymous
1/13/16, 7:36 PM
Hot new story!
Anonymous
1/13/16, 6:03 PM
Promising start.Hope to see how Eddy turns out ( hopefully hairless tatooed and pierced--my fav kinks)
San Francisco Reader
1/13/16, 5:49 PM
So far, so good...I enjoyed the introduction. Here's hoping Brad 'does a real number' on Ed, changing him into a 'new man'....Also I hope it doesn't take to long before we see a second [ hopefully longer ] chapter, where we get a better idea of what Brad has in mind for Ed's mind & body....