Recent Comments

RE: D
1/14/16, 12:01 AM
Not very good descriptions, a tad disjointed, and an overall strange way to describe sweat. Not bad though, keep it up.
EdIam
1/13/16, 10:30 PM
Started school this week and trying, my friends!! Don't worry, I'm still working on it. It's quite a bit longer than previous chapters already. So hopefully you all think it will be worth the wait!
Anonymous
1/13/16, 8:24 PM
All in all, it's just an introduction. A promising start. Wish to learn whether Brad is under influence of a bigger plan or acts for his own. In any case, love to see Ed be molded to a more muscular, gym and cycle obsessed jock.
Anonymous
1/13/16, 7:36 PM
Hot new story!
Anonymous
1/13/16, 6:03 PM
Promising start.Hope to see how Eddy turns out ( hopefully hairless tatooed and pierced--my fav kinks)
San Francisco Reader
1/13/16, 5:49 PM
So far, so good...I enjoyed the introduction. Here's hoping Brad 'does a real number' on Ed, changing him into a 'new man'....Also I hope it doesn't take to long before we see a second [ hopefully longer ] chapter, where we get a better idea of what Brad has in mind for Ed's mind & body....
Bankstreet
1/13/16, 3:45 PM
Promising..... Eager for more here.
Anonymous
1/13/16, 3:27 PM
This could be good, but it's too early to tell. Maybe you could post a longer piece next time?
Anonymous
1/13/16, 8:09 AM
Chapter 7 please?