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Anonymous
1/13/16, 8:09 AM
Chapter 7 please?
MonsterMash62
1/13/16, 2:30 AM
This is still one of my favorites. I love the reality shifts and how the Eli is oblivious. So well done.
Anonymous
1/13/16, 2:19 AM
Nice start!
Anonymous
1/13/16, 12:04 AM
I loooove these kinds of stories, please continue. Maybe get inside the heads of the controlled some more.
Anonymous
1/12/16, 10:49 PM
Please, make another chapter, showing us the new debasing life of the couple, with both of them remembering how well respected they used to be!!!
Jamie
1/12/16, 6:58 PM
This story was amazing!!! Does anyone know who the author is?
BoonBoon
1/12/16, 6:29 PM
Hi! I'm intrigued, this sounds promising. Your style is very austere and I respect that, but if you allow me a suggestion, it could improve a lot adding more descriptions of how men look, or what they are wearing when they're not naked. Since Grant works in a farm, would be hot if you describe him wearing some sluty cowboy clothing, beside going naked all the time (daisy dukes, thong, tight shirt, hat and some hot boots, maybe). Would be good to know more about the master too. Who is he, his age, and how he looks like. Is he ugly? handsome? is he a nerd looking for revenge? He just want to fuck every man in town, or he wants to ridicule them too? Calling him "master" all the time would be repetitive, sounds very simple and boring to me. You could alternate with "Sir", "Mayor" or "Boss", for avoid the simple use of "Yes, Master" that is overused on mind control stories.
Anonymous
1/12/16, 8:51 AM
This was taken from a Tumblr post
Kyle
1/12/16, 8:40 AM
Another excellent tale. And with a great message as well. Perfect writing, as always.