Recent Comments

San Francisco Reader
1/13/16, 5:49 PM
So far, so good...I enjoyed the introduction. Here's hoping Brad 'does a real number' on Ed, changing him into a 'new man'....Also I hope it doesn't take to long before we see a second [ hopefully longer ] chapter, where we get a better idea of what Brad has in mind for Ed's mind & body....
Bankstreet
1/13/16, 3:45 PM
Promising..... Eager for more here.
Anonymous
1/13/16, 3:27 PM
This could be good, but it's too early to tell. Maybe you could post a longer piece next time?
Anonymous
1/13/16, 8:09 AM
Chapter 7 please?
MonsterMash62
1/13/16, 2:30 AM
This is still one of my favorites. I love the reality shifts and how the Eli is oblivious. So well done.
Anonymous
1/13/16, 2:19 AM
Nice start!
Anonymous
1/13/16, 12:04 AM
I loooove these kinds of stories, please continue. Maybe get inside the heads of the controlled some more.
Anonymous
1/12/16, 10:49 PM
Please, make another chapter, showing us the new debasing life of the couple, with both of them remembering how well respected they used to be!!!
Jamie
1/12/16, 6:58 PM
This story was amazing!!! Does anyone know who the author is?