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Anonymous
1/13/16, 2:19 AM
Nice start!
Anonymous
1/13/16, 12:04 AM
I loooove these kinds of stories, please continue. Maybe get inside the heads of the controlled some more.
Anonymous
1/12/16, 10:49 PM
Please, make another chapter, showing us the new debasing life of the couple, with both of them remembering how well respected they used to be!!!
Jamie
1/12/16, 6:58 PM
This story was amazing!!! Does anyone know who the author is?
BoonBoon
1/12/16, 6:29 PM
Hi! I'm intrigued, this sounds promising. Your style is very austere and I respect that, but if you allow me a suggestion, it could improve a lot adding more descriptions of how men look, or what they are wearing when they're not naked. Since Grant works in a farm, would be hot if you describe him wearing some sluty cowboy clothing, beside going naked all the time (daisy dukes, thong, tight shirt, hat and some hot boots, maybe). Would be good to know more about the master too. Who is he, his age, and how he looks like. Is he ugly? handsome? is he a nerd looking for revenge? He just want to fuck every man in town, or he wants to ridicule them too? Calling him "master" all the time would be repetitive, sounds very simple and boring to me. You could alternate with "Sir", "Mayor" or "Boss", for avoid the simple use of "Yes, Master" that is overused on mind control stories.
Anonymous
1/12/16, 8:51 AM
This was taken from a Tumblr post
Kyle
1/12/16, 8:40 AM
Another excellent tale. And with a great message as well. Perfect writing, as always.
Anonymous
1/12/16, 8:28 AM
The Home Page contains links (About Page, News) that allow messages to be sent to the site moderator. Authors cherish comments, and finding one addressed to someone else tacked onto your story is disheartening. If you're reading the stories using a computer with Windows, you can change the apparent type size by simultaneously holding down the "cntl" key and moving the wheel on the mouse. Turning the wheel forward enlarges the type; moving it back decreases the type size. The text will adjust the line breaks automatically to accommodate the change in type size.
Anonymous
1/12/16, 6:46 AM
you can put a napkin on someone's mouth but you cannot force him to swallow
Anonymous
1/12/16, 12:33 AM
Where did the first two ranch hands come from? And why didn't Mark wake the boys up while they were sucking on each other just for a reaction. He could have said horse slave and they would be back to ranch hands.