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Anonymous
1/4/16, 8:29 PM
Still holding out hope that Alex gets his in the end ^_^
Anonymous
1/4/16, 8:19 PM
I'm just curious as to how the author is going to treat the Mother & girlfriend in this now sick perverted household ????
Anonymous
1/4/16, 8:16 PM
Edlam, Keep-up the good work...I'm looking forward to meeting Daddy. Here's hoping that Alex, with only his own rotten father as an example, makes Jake's & jj's 'Daddy' the worst example of an awful 'father figure' his sick mind can come up with...Also [like with the cop] I hope the 'new & improved' Bully-of-a-dad, looks up to 'the fine young all-real-man' of a next door neighbor, Alex as an example of the kind of manly son he wish's he had had, rather than a 'filthy queer', who he now realizes he has always hated & his older son, who has also let him down by becoming 'gay'...Finally I agree with a previous comment that it would be extra sexy if [although gay himself] the father was a self-hating/in-the-closet homophobic drunken asshole who takes out his self loathing on being secretly gay by treating other gays in a brutal manner...Don't you think Alex would love this ???
Anonymous
1/4/16, 7:59 PM
Shame there wasn't any cock or muscle growth thrown in..imagine JJ and Alex...and Officer CockforBrains growing HUGE!
Anonymous
1/4/16, 7:58 PM
What if Jacobs best friend Eric became JJ' and Alex' sudden best friend and another bully.. What a shame 4 the Filthy Queer.. And what if,even though 'Masters' JJ and Alex were top thugs,superior to all other men,what if ALL OTHER MEN were superior bully thugs to poor little Filthy Queer..? Just a hot thought..
Jan 4, 2016
johnox
1/4/16, 6:34 PM
Well, I'm flattered. I'll have a think about where it should go - I don't want just to describe a porno scene at the club. The story is a mix of autobiography (I am a typesetter living in Oxford) and fantasy, so it flowed from my fingertips without interruption over an hour or so, but I think for anything that follows I'll be reliant on good old imagination, not my strongest point!
Tom (eroticgayhypnosis)
1/4/16, 6:15 PM
hot sort...Love the thought of more guys outside the family. Have them take a walk through town re educating guys.
Jan 4, 2016
Anonymous
1/4/16, 4:51 PM
Please write a sequel! Such a hot story and so well-written!!!
EdIam
1/4/16, 4:38 PM
Glad you guys liked this one! Planning on working into the next chapter this evening a bit. Daddy's home!!
Anonymous
1/4/16, 4:28 PM
Amazing! Great! Keeping going, please!!