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Anonymous
1/4/16, 5:32 AM
Nice twist at the end. I enjoy your creativity.
Anonymous
1/4/16, 4:25 AM
Gosh chapter 6 was worth the wait. I loved every part of it, but may I make one [probably unwanted] suggestion : When the Re Educator is used on a character , [such as the police officer] could we have a little more exposition of how the character's mind processes the new information, how their memories are changed, how they rationalize their new behaviors, etc. It is so 'hot' when their new mind set causes a subtle but pronounced change in their persona ,[ new choices in clothing, new addictions in smoking, drinking, dislike in women & family in general, lowering of intellect.. all the subjects we find so exciting in mind control & transformation fiction]... I hope the father will be a more fully developed character, [& the exact reverse of the pure christian,good,father he was: it's time he became a rotten, bad mouthed, hard drinking, cigar smoking, wife hating, faggot hating-homophobic in the closet, Bully that's even worse on Jake than JJ & Alex] who would like nothing better than beating-up on a queer, before he passes out in his usual nightly drunken state !.....Then on to Alex's brothers, the officers fellow cops & finally JJ's teammates !
Mr.Dick
1/4/16, 4:04 AM
Sorry this is the only site I've posted stories on. but I promise there is more to come ;)
Anonymous
1/4/16, 4:01 AM
This was definitely worth the wait. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for writing.
BoonBoon
1/4/16, 3:52 AM
At the first I was reluctant to the desperate petition to include cops that I saw repeatedly in previous chapters. I love cops in transformation stories that involve humiliation, but cops seemed out of place here. I was even slightly irritated about the insistence of that reader, but the way you've inserted the cop in your story is simply perfect. My favourite part is what Alex has done with the Officer! I love when the characters are renamed with debasing names, and Filthy Queer was good, but rename the cop from Officer Cochran to Officer Cockforbrains is simply awesome! The way he's ruining his uniform was fantastic too! I hope that by the time of his return, Officer Cockforbrains is wearing a totaly ruined and filthy uniform due the many inspection he has done in the course of the day!!
Mr.Dick
1/4/16, 3:46 AM
Bravo edlam you have outdone yourself with this chapter! Smoking hot!
Anonymous
1/4/16, 3:07 AM
Glad we see someone else outside the family. The policeman is cuter. I am just afraid that for the next chapter, the play-with-the-loser-dad plot will be less exciting than this chapter... why not Cockforbrains come back quickly with Bill soon? lol And don't forget Eric! Where is he?
Anonymous
1/4/16, 2:56 AM
GOOD WORK !! WOW, THIS WAS WORTH THE WAIT....[ALSO LIKE THE INTRODUCTION OF OFFICER COCKFORBRAINS]...HERE'S HOPING WE DON'T HAVE TO WAIT TO LONG FOR HIS RETURN..AS FOR JAKE, IT'S ABOUT TIME HE BECAME THE 'FILTHY QUEER' ALEX WAS CALLING HIM...GOOD WORK JJ !!!....NOW THAT ALEX & JJ FEEL THEY ARE SUPERIOR TO ALL OTHER MEN [ WHO ARE REALLY REPRESSED FAGGOT'S, IT LOOKS LIKE EDLAM CAN KEEP THIS SERIES GOING AS LONG AS IT TURNS HIM [AND US] ON...AGAIN GOOD WORK, WELL DONE !!!
Anonymous
1/4/16, 2:56 AM
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS! It's my favorite! SO HOT! I guess we have more detailed blueprint, right? The follow-up interview... I think Dave will invite more fellow hunk cops (including Bill, for instance) to the interview, won't he? Oh my! SO HOT! And the father! Finally! There's also a twist here, about the bullying between the Smith brothers... umm, another guess that probably those other 3 brothers will show up in the interview, right? Oh my! SO HOT! Brilliant as always, thx for your work! EdIam! Love it! Love it! Love! We need coaches as well! Keep going!
Anonymous
1/4/16, 2:43 AM
Super hot! Good to see some football sessions!