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BoonBoon
1/4/16, 3:52 AM
At the first I was reluctant to the desperate petition to include cops that I saw repeatedly in previous chapters. I love cops in transformation stories that involve humiliation, but cops seemed out of place here. I was even slightly irritated about the insistence of that reader, but the way you've inserted the cop in your story is simply perfect. My favourite part is what Alex has done with the Officer! I love when the characters are renamed with debasing names, and Filthy Queer was good, but rename the cop from Officer Cochran to Officer Cockforbrains is simply awesome! The way he's ruining his uniform was fantastic too! I hope that by the time of his return, Officer Cockforbrains is wearing a totaly ruined and filthy uniform due the many inspection he has done in the course of the day!!
Mr.Dick
1/4/16, 3:46 AM
Bravo edlam you have outdone yourself with this chapter! Smoking hot!
Anonymous
1/4/16, 3:07 AM
Glad we see someone else outside the family. The policeman is cuter. I am just afraid that for the next chapter, the play-with-the-loser-dad plot will be less exciting than this chapter... why not Cockforbrains come back quickly with Bill soon? lol And don't forget Eric! Where is he?
Anonymous
1/4/16, 2:56 AM
GOOD WORK !! WOW, THIS WAS WORTH THE WAIT....[ALSO LIKE THE INTRODUCTION OF OFFICER COCKFORBRAINS]...HERE'S HOPING WE DON'T HAVE TO WAIT TO LONG FOR HIS RETURN..AS FOR JAKE, IT'S ABOUT TIME HE BECAME THE 'FILTHY QUEER' ALEX WAS CALLING HIM...GOOD WORK JJ !!!....NOW THAT ALEX & JJ FEEL THEY ARE SUPERIOR TO ALL OTHER MEN [ WHO ARE REALLY REPRESSED FAGGOT'S, IT LOOKS LIKE EDLAM CAN KEEP THIS SERIES GOING AS LONG AS IT TURNS HIM [AND US] ON...AGAIN GOOD WORK, WELL DONE !!!
Anonymous
1/4/16, 2:56 AM
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS! It's my favorite! SO HOT! I guess we have more detailed blueprint, right? The follow-up interview... I think Dave will invite more fellow hunk cops (including Bill, for instance) to the interview, won't he? Oh my! SO HOT! And the father! Finally! There's also a twist here, about the bullying between the Smith brothers... umm, another guess that probably those other 3 brothers will show up in the interview, right? Oh my! SO HOT! Brilliant as always, thx for your work! EdIam! Love it! Love it! Love! We need coaches as well! Keep going!
Anonymous
1/4/16, 2:43 AM
Super hot! Good to see some football sessions!
Anonymous
1/4/16, 2:31 AM
hot as fuck.next chapter please. loving the fag domination
Anonymous
1/4/16, 12:22 AM
Difficult given the number of typos and missing words, but a good story.
Anonymous
1/3/16, 10:36 PM
On behalf of many readers, thanks for keeping us posted Edlam..But hurry. We know you have a life in addition to your writing, but your first 5 chapters were such a hit [& came out in just a matter of a few weeks] so we're sort of spoiled ! Only one thing, please remember to continue with the heavy 'Bullying' aspect's of the story & don't 'wimp-out' on us. Thanks....
Anonymous
1/3/16, 10:23 PM
AgainstMyWill shouldn't worry..old or new, I enjoyed this story....