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8/12/24, 10:24 AM
Given the fact Ryan's real thought are "this is disgusting, no stop", it's REALLY not consentual non-consent. The tag exist for collar stories where like, a character ask for rape roleplay. Otherwise, fun story! Excited for more sexy tales. :green_heart:
8/12/24, 7:27 AM
10/10 as always Sir. Don’t know how you do it, but you always knock it our of the park on your stories.
8/8/24, 6:59 AM
you are one of the best writers of Drone stories on here, i always know when i see your name, is going to be an interesting read, and for that I thank you, my attempts of writing a Drone story are nowhere as good as yours. i liked how Justin was found out in this chapter, being a spy. I suppose (and it is not a criticism) part of me would have liked that he was conditioned to become a double agent, under the control of "The Master" " A chip maybe inserted into his brain, his body fussed with rubber, but his head left human. (always good to have someone on the inside to warn the Drone Collective)

8/12/24, 7:27 AM
@[MalSkin](/user/show/131172) My thoughts exactly
Pupwhositso
8/12/24, 7:22 AM
Such an excellent story.
8/11/24, 10:53 PM
The description of the artifacts... even re-reading for the third time, it really looks like Benny finds three rings that were on a single string, and then there are two rings remaining after he takes one. But then it's stated they were three *necklaces* plus an additional ring. Kind of annoying such an important moment is confusing as heck, because otherwise, the chapter is VERY sexy and well-written.

8/12/24, 6:33 AM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) I had to reread it, too—I think what happens is that Benny opens the trunk, finds a bunch of chains with padlocks on them, then notices the small bag that contains the three magic rings. For me the trick was realizing that the chapter initially refers to the find as “chains,” then switches to “necklaces” to signify that they can be worn, with the rings as separate. Hope that helps!

8/12/24, 7:18 AM
@[Feed Your Head](/user/show/1170832) Yeah, it's made a lot clearer by the description of tge same scene in chapter two. Honestly, not a deal-breaker, but it's kind of an important scene, reading it the first time, I thought those were chains holding back the chest opening fully.
8/12/24, 4:59 AM
digging this one big time!
8/12/24, 4:18 AM
I agree with the comments. With the original story I did like how he used his powers on the person and what words and stuff and I am a little disappointed that the original story was left on a cliffhanger of sorts
Pupwhositso
8/12/24, 3:45 AM
What an excellent story!
Anonymous
8/12/24, 1:25 AM
Chapter 4 please! Don’t leave it like this :sob:
8/11/24, 11:08 PM
Please continue writing. I love this story !

8/12/24, 1:02 AM
@[naturellementsoumis](/user/show/1193036) Don’t worry! I’m still working on it!