Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/28/15, 11:15 AM
Please, bring back Officer Oliver's trashed uniform in the next chapter! Would be hot if he wears a ragged uniform or a slutty uniform, so he can be more humiliated!!
Anonymous
12/28/15, 11:03 AM
I love this so much! Can I ask for a part two, please? I want to see where this goes!
Dec 27, 2015
Anonymous
12/28/15, 10:20 AM
I enjoyed this, but I'm not sure whom I pity more: the Robbies or the obsessed, addicted puppet master.
Anonymous
12/28/15, 10:17 AM
wish there was a part 4
Chris
12/28/15, 9:42 AM
love to read the next chapter
Dec 27, 2015
Anonymous
12/28/15, 9:06 AM
Nice. More TR adventures please.
Dec 27, 2015
Cliff
12/28/15, 12:42 AM
Submission is the best pleasure, control is the best endorphin. Always like your story about surrender one's free will , the most intrigue element of mc stories.
Anonymous
12/27/15, 10:54 PM
Great teaser! Just by itself it is good..gonna buy the full version soon. Need to charge my Kindle. Always happy to see new stories by you!
mi621lansing@yahoo.com
12/27/15, 10:47 PM
I am not sure if the author would, but I would. I had high hopes for the story line but hated the ending.
Anonymous
12/27/15, 10:45 PM
The story had a good premise but with the grammar errors they ended up making it a total turn off. I honestly quit reading but tried to come back to it a few different times to finish reading but I just couldn't do it. I would suggest re-editing and re-posting.