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RE-EDUCATED READER
12/24/15, 6:28 AM
EDLAM: DON'T FORGET YOUR DEDICATED READERS FOR CHRISTMAS...HOPE WE FIND A NICE 'HOT' HOLIDAY TREAT....LOVE FROM ALL YOUR READERS
EdBehr
12/24/15, 4:21 AM
Good start of the story. Looking forward to the direction this goes. Keep writing please
Anonymous
12/24/15, 3:52 AM
I like that he wasn't really destroyed, just made..... really horny! :-)
Anonymous
12/24/15, 3:51 AM
I hope the author plans on following this thru it is too hot
Hyphap
12/24/15, 2:57 AM
I'm almost embarrassed by how much I identified with the officer.
Anonymous
12/24/15, 12:10 AM
Good to have an older, rugged man as the cop victim. Nothing beats fucking a mature muscle man :}
Mr.Dick
12/23/15, 11:40 PM
Thanks so much for the good feedback! I will hopefully be putting out a new chapter by the end of the week.
Anonymous
12/23/15, 11:39 PM
Love me some Baralai stories. Don't stop writing
Hyphap
12/23/15, 9:27 PM
Oh, this is really getting me going. Nothing subtle, but very hot.
Kovu
12/23/15, 7:52 PM
Thank you for the feed back, guys. In future stories I will add a MC element to it. This is really just an attempt at writing smut and gauging what people think. I won't forget to use capitals for a Master's referral! Thanks for the tip!