Recent Comments

Hyphap
12/23/15, 9:27 PM
Oh, this is really getting me going. Nothing subtle, but very hot.
Kovu
12/23/15, 7:52 PM
Thank you for the feed back, guys. In future stories I will add a MC element to it. This is really just an attempt at writing smut and gauging what people think. I won't forget to use capitals for a Master's referral! Thanks for the tip!
Anonymous
12/23/15, 2:40 PM
Truly a most electrifying tale. I felt pity for Officer Bright, but it only lasted a split-second. I will enjoy imagining his further destruction!
Cliff
12/23/15, 12:35 PM
Another Baralai's story? Hurray ! Your stories are always fresh and hot, this one is no exception, well done!
Anonymous
12/23/15, 3:42 AM
Very nice start!
Anonymous
12/23/15, 2:17 AM
Awesome!!! I hope they managed to escape somehow!!
Chicago Bully-Boy
12/23/15, 1:55 AM
.....Just discovered this story. I love mind control stuff anyway, but the Bully aspect makes it super hot. Guess you could say its 'politically incorrect', but I got off on the changes to the character of Jake, the way his mind found a way to accept his new feelings of admiration towards his Bully, Alex. It was a letdown when these feeling's were removed. I also enjoyed the changes to J.J.'s mind as he turned into a bully himself. But again, I felt the author didn't carry through, enough. I still have hope that these aspects of the story will return and this won't turn into just another J.O. story : meaning just sex scene after sex scene. Anyway, thanks for publishing this hot bully story.
Anonymous
12/22/15, 10:08 PM
'Murder' ? What the hell is the previous poster talking about ? Dark, can be very 'sexy' & not all erotic stories have to be uplifting [or non-violent, for that matter..though this one hasn't turned violent yet..]. The reader doesn't have to 'like' Alex. Remember, while the 'Re-Educator' turned him gay, it didn't make him 'proud' or pro-gay, it just changed his promiscious sexuality from girls to boy's...No mention was made changing his complete homophobia ...He's far from the first gay man who was basically 'anti-gay', though most are 'in the closet'. In this context, it just makes sense that he would transfer all his awful anti gay feelings onto JJ, [& probably some chapters in the future on to the rest of the character's].. I'm just waiting for Alex to re-educate Jake's mind set, turning him into the type of gay 'boi' a homophobic bigot would assume a 'dirty queer' was. We should remember that Alex is in charge & the author is showing us the world through his twisted eye's. The only thing I'v missed in the last few chapters is Edlam showing us how the character's, especially JJ, rationalize their actions in their own mind's...This was especially apparent when Alex had JJ call his mother a 'cunt' & say his father would be interested in seeing his son's fuck...Even if he's just saying these thing's to please Alex, [in the context of what's come before]. He has to find a reason in his 'new' past memories to find some reason to say them.....
Anonymous
12/22/15, 9:49 PM
great story
Anonymous
12/22/15, 9:30 PM
This should stop, it's getting too violent and dark that murder is almost expected