Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/22/15, 10:08 PM
'Murder' ? What the hell is the previous poster talking about ? Dark, can be very 'sexy' & not all erotic stories have to be uplifting [or non-violent, for that matter..though this one hasn't turned violent yet..]. The reader doesn't have to 'like' Alex. Remember, while the 'Re-Educator' turned him gay, it didn't make him 'proud' or pro-gay, it just changed his promiscious sexuality from girls to boy's...No mention was made changing his complete homophobia ...He's far from the first gay man who was basically 'anti-gay', though most are 'in the closet'. In this context, it just makes sense that he would transfer all his awful anti gay feelings onto JJ, [& probably some chapters in the future on to the rest of the character's].. I'm just waiting for Alex to re-educate Jake's mind set, turning him into the type of gay 'boi' a homophobic bigot would assume a 'dirty queer' was. We should remember that Alex is in charge & the author is showing us the world through his twisted eye's. The only thing I'v missed in the last few chapters is Edlam showing us how the character's, especially JJ, rationalize their actions in their own mind's...This was especially apparent when Alex had JJ call his mother a 'cunt' & say his father would be interested in seeing his son's fuck...Even if he's just saying these thing's to please Alex, [in the context of what's come before]. He has to find a reason in his 'new' past memories to find some reason to say them.....
Anonymous
12/22/15, 9:49 PM
great story
Anonymous
12/22/15, 9:30 PM
This should stop, it's getting too violent and dark that murder is almost expected
Ranch
12/22/15, 7:20 PM
Brilliant. I live this story. Please don't let him escape control and abuse!
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
12/22/15, 5:36 PM
“I’m your bitch Azeem. Fuck! Let me be your bitch. You can put it anywhere! I don’t care! Let me make it feel good! I’M YOUR BITCH” So good to be a real Man's bitch! Hot story!
Joey
12/22/15, 5:14 PM
Hot!
rofous
12/22/15, 5:13 PM
omg i waited for 2month i though u stop. unfortunately u didnt .. nice work . really hope ur story can be a real movie or drama ..
Cliff
12/22/15, 11:45 AM
Part 10 appeared and then disappeared... don't know why.
Anonymous
12/22/15, 9:40 AM
GO GO GO!
Anonymous
12/22/15, 7:42 AM
Edlam you are seriously strong. Congrats on the attitude. Honestly we,re not you and can't tell where story is going. So it's a bit premature to cast judgements. However I don't like Alex. I'm still rooting for Jake (although him continuing Alex's changes could be hot). Anyway thanks for treating comments as the constructive criticism they are.