Recent Comments

slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
12/22/15, 5:36 PM
“I’m your bitch Azeem. Fuck! Let me be your bitch. You can put it anywhere! I don’t care! Let me make it feel good! I’M YOUR BITCH” So good to be a real Man's bitch! Hot story!
Joey
12/22/15, 5:14 PM
Hot!
rofous
12/22/15, 5:13 PM
omg i waited for 2month i though u stop. unfortunately u didnt .. nice work . really hope ur story can be a real movie or drama ..
Cliff
12/22/15, 11:45 AM
Part 10 appeared and then disappeared... don't know why.
Anonymous
12/22/15, 9:40 AM
GO GO GO!
Anonymous
12/22/15, 7:42 AM
Edlam you are seriously strong. Congrats on the attitude. Honestly we,re not you and can't tell where story is going. So it's a bit premature to cast judgements. However I don't like Alex. I'm still rooting for Jake (although him continuing Alex's changes could be hot). Anyway thanks for treating comments as the constructive criticism they are.
Insignia
12/22/15, 5:05 AM
Sorry it's taken so long guys! Taking exams which are a bitch. Hopefully whoever has enjoyed this work, will continue to get your climaxes from this haha.
Anonymous
12/22/15, 2:34 AM
At the very end, [& lets hope that's somewhere in the distant future, in say chapter 15 to 17,] we can hope for a 'happy ending', when someone new or from the first chapter returns & makes everything 'normal' again...but in the mean time I hope the mind controller bully has a field day with lot's more demented turns !
Anonymous
12/21/15, 11:53 PM
Just to say this... I've never been emotionally invested in a MC story as I have this one. It's super hot, but at the same time incredibly depressing and sad. It's so super rare that I find myself NOT rooting for the mind controller. Hoping for a "happy" ending but either way, this story has me hooked like no story I've ever read before.
Anonymous
12/21/15, 5:50 PM
EDLAM : THANKS FOR BEING SUCH A GREAT GUY, & SO UNDERSTANDING ! YOU KNOW THE COMMENT'S ARE MEANT WITH THE BEST OF INTENTIONS: OF COURSE IT'S YOUR STORY, BUT WE'RE ALL ENJOYING IT SO MUCH & LOOKING FORWARD TO CHAPTER 6 AND BEYOND ! HAVE A GREAT CHRISTMAS....