Recent Comments

Cliff
12/22/15, 11:45 AM
Part 10 appeared and then disappeared... don't know why.
Anonymous
12/22/15, 9:40 AM
GO GO GO!
Anonymous
12/22/15, 7:42 AM
Edlam you are seriously strong. Congrats on the attitude. Honestly we,re not you and can't tell where story is going. So it's a bit premature to cast judgements. However I don't like Alex. I'm still rooting for Jake (although him continuing Alex's changes could be hot). Anyway thanks for treating comments as the constructive criticism they are.
Insignia
12/22/15, 5:05 AM
Sorry it's taken so long guys! Taking exams which are a bitch. Hopefully whoever has enjoyed this work, will continue to get your climaxes from this haha.
Anonymous
12/22/15, 2:34 AM
At the very end, [& lets hope that's somewhere in the distant future, in say chapter 15 to 17,] we can hope for a 'happy ending', when someone new or from the first chapter returns & makes everything 'normal' again...but in the mean time I hope the mind controller bully has a field day with lot's more demented turns !
Anonymous
12/21/15, 11:53 PM
Just to say this... I've never been emotionally invested in a MC story as I have this one. It's super hot, but at the same time incredibly depressing and sad. It's so super rare that I find myself NOT rooting for the mind controller. Hoping for a "happy" ending but either way, this story has me hooked like no story I've ever read before.
Anonymous
12/21/15, 5:50 PM
EDLAM : THANKS FOR BEING SUCH A GREAT GUY, & SO UNDERSTANDING ! YOU KNOW THE COMMENT'S ARE MEANT WITH THE BEST OF INTENTIONS: OF COURSE IT'S YOUR STORY, BUT WE'RE ALL ENJOYING IT SO MUCH & LOOKING FORWARD TO CHAPTER 6 AND BEYOND ! HAVE A GREAT CHRISTMAS....
EdIam
12/21/15, 5:25 PM
Wow!! The responses are blowing me away! Honestly stepped away from the site yesterday not because this isn't everyone's favorite chapter but because I went to Star Wars. Thanks to EVERYONE with feedback. I don't let those that don't necessarily feel this chapter get to me at all. The story is progressing just how I want to. But, man, it's blowing my mind the amount of passion my silly little story is inspiring. Working a double today, unfortunately, due to a sick coworker, so can't get back to the writing until tomorrow. To all of you, the supportive AND constructive comments mean a lot to me. All of you write what you're thinking and express what you may or may not enjoy. Any comment left merely means my story has affected you enough to want to talk about it. I'm not disheartened in the slightest! I'm honored that so many care for my characters!! Chapter 6 will be coming shortly!
I am scared
12/21/15, 4:57 PM
By the way, anyone finds the above big blue picture on this website a little...scary?
Brody
12/21/15, 4:39 PM
Honestly, I'm hoping for some karma, but that's just me. As a person with stories on this site, you have to understand that at the end of the day, the story is the author's. He is writing what is important to him and no one else. Yes this is a grim story and might not be to everyone's liking, but let's admit, in the history of this site and its previous site, ncmc, there has never been such buzz about a story. I wish I was half the writer that he is. There is a natural build to chapter stories and you might not like every chapter, but keep with it. It may surprise you