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A CONCERNED READER
12/21/15, 7:45 AM
My goodness, All these 'Goody-two-shoes' out there, hating bully's, wanting Alex 'beaten into a pulp',hate to see a 'decent family destroyed',sick of Alex, want the tables turned, want Alex to get his 'comeuppance'...Why are they even bothering to continue reading this story??? Turn on Hallmark t.v. folks ! Most of us don't read these stories to 'feel good', we read them to 'get-off'..If a story is not our cup-of-tea, we skip it until we find one we enjoy...Do any of these readers really think the author is 'anti-Alex' or anti-bullying...well then we must be reading different stories. It looks to me like we [& the author] are supposed to 'get off' on the very un-P.C. idea of 'the power of the bully' & the destruction of a decent Christian family...It is not in the least 'arrogant' to give one's ideas to the author since we 'trolls' are well aware that they can be rejected...I could bet you that Edlam is far from 'demoralized' by our comment's. It must be exciting to know that your story has caused so much attention !....Finally count me in the group that doesn't care for the 'INVISIBLE STUFF'......
Anonymous
12/21/15, 7:15 AM
Phenomenal!
Anonymous
12/21/15, 5:16 AM
NO~ We need that INVISIBLE stuff. Please, some of the posts here seem to be too arrogant. There's no account for tastes, right? Someone thinks it is STUPID. well I think he doesn't really respect the author and his work! Stop these trolls, okay!? These trolls may only demoralize the author.
Demonios
12/21/15, 5:04 AM
To be honest I hate bullies. I would really love to see Alex beaten into a pulp. Involving the parents is a bit much for me, sex is great but not destroying a decent family.
Anonymous
12/21/15, 4:37 AM
I agree. Sorry but frankly I am sick of Alex. Please let Jake turn the tables.
Anonymous
12/21/15, 4:33 AM
I really hope Alex is getting his comeuppance soon. This is just getting really sick
Anonymous
12/21/15, 4:17 AM
To be honest, I'm just waiting for Jake to return to his friend, who will tell him the Re-Educator and help him to remember all this, hate Alex and turn the tables one and for all. Btw, You are planning to continue "I Love Him, But..."? Awesome! I love that story <3
Anonymous
12/21/15, 3:16 AM
I'll agree with other posters and point out it's almost never the sex that's interesting; it's the psychological and emotional context and the buildup toward it (that's one reason why some of the stories on this site that have barely any sex in them are among the hottest). Prolonging the sex without it leading anywhere—without direction—is just aimless and boring. The story's set up and denouement is really what gets us - the sex is never the main thing but just an enhancement. What's so appealing about most of these stories is that they're wish fulfillment for many of us. I think only the sickest among us would really want to be like Alex in real life. Frankly, I hope Jake gets back the machine and is halfway thru transforming Alex when he accidentally falls or drops the Re-Educator, rendering Alex a vegetable for the rest of his life (or maybe Alex should spend the rest of his life being a fucktoy for AIDS victims).
Anonymous
12/21/15, 3:02 AM
A lo mejor en la parte 2, hipnotizan al padre para que el amigo también se divierta :D
Anonymous
12/21/15, 2:43 AM
God, this is hot. More, please!!