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Anonymous
12/20/15, 9:53 PM
I have been following this story with great interest, but have to admit, chapter 5 is MY LEAST FAVORITE....It was almost all a long fairly common sex scene...I agree 100% with the comment [18:08] & all this invisable Alex stuff is just plane silly, destroying the whole realistic premise of the re-educator..A lot of 'sex' does not in itself make a story 'sexier': What WAS SO HOT IN THE PREVIOUS CHAPTERS was how the characters mind was altered & how they rationalized their new behavior...There should have been a much longer build-up to sex between JJ & Jake...I would have enjoyed a day or two of further changes in JJ : how he now acts different, his walk [swagger ?], his manner's [or lack thereof], his new choice of wardrobe [tight, sexy, reveling ], his new habits [smoking, anyone?]...Then it would be time to start changing each family members relation's to him & each other..I feel the phone call was a big mistake. We should have seen the family reactions when they arrived home & how Alex would have solved them, one by one.....PLEASE CUT OUT ALL THIS INVISIBLE STUFF, IT'S SILLY & DESTROY'S THE WHOLE REALISTIC BASIS FOR THE STORY !!!!
Anonymous
12/20/15, 9:27 PM
Always supports you, Edlam, no matter what. This is your novel. And I, as a voracious but faithful reader, will simply follow you to the end of the story lol
EdIam
12/20/15, 8:49 PM
Sorry this isn't everyone's cup of tea! Hopefully something in the previous chapters really got you excited! My advice, stick to that and get enjoyment out of it. Some people may enjoy this darker chapter for their own reasons. And, well, there's more to come that you may enjoy. Everything isn't going to be everyone's preference, especially in a sub-genre with so many different levels of interest. Some want simple mind control, some want complete domination. If you're giving up on the story at this point, that's cool. I hope there was something in there in previous chapters that got you excited! I'm gonna keep taking the story where I want it to go because, in the end, it's gotta turn me on before I even think about submitting it. Thanks again, everyone, for your input!! Love the amount of discussion my story has caused!
Anonymous
12/20/15, 8:25 PM
This story has taken such a dark turn I dont want to continue reading it
Anonymous
12/20/15, 7:28 PM
Alex's nature takes away any interest in the story. It's not love of control or sex it's just violence
EdIam
12/20/15, 7:15 PM
If you recall, in the second chapter, the first (and only) time Jake used the Re-Educator on Alex, he turned him gay. Therefore, Alex has the same sex drive, only he has interest in men now rather than women. His nature before was to just fuck as many women as possible by attempting to control them and now he has the same need when it comes to men.
Anonymous
12/20/15, 7:12 PM
I like JJ and Alex together. Just saying. I do feel bad for Jake though. Interested why Alex who started straight seems to be gay now though.
EdIam
12/20/15, 6:43 PM
Hey everyone! Thanks for the feedback and the quick responses! To address some of the questions: I might finally go back and finish I Love Him, But...I always planned on doing one more chapter but kind of lost interest. Now that I'm so into this story, however, it wouldn't happen until I finish this one up. The bullying may be too extreme for some, I just write when I find to be hot. This one may seem particularly mean spirited, but from my perspective, the always upstanding JJ becoming so horrible at Alex's whim is really hot to me. I also found it sexy that, ultimately, due to the circumstances, Jake crossed the incest line without the need to be tized...and JJ loving forcing his brother to do it because of his need to please Alex. Sorry if it's too much, but, in the end, I'm gonna write what gets me going. Won't always be for everyone, kind of the nature of writing. I've heard from several different people and nearly everyone has cited different scenes in different chapters as their personal favorite. Hopefully someone will find something here to be right up their alley. I want to explore many different avenues with my writing so everyone gets their box checked now and again. I will say, however, the next chapter will feature much more Re-Educator use. As always, I'll try to focus more on the rationalization in the minds of the victims. That seems to be the most universal 'sexy thing' in these kinds of stories. Thanks, everyone, for your passion for my story!! I know that even if this wasn't your favorite chapter, hopefully you'll like something down the road a lot more :D. Feel free to message me at ed.edwards105@gmail.com!! You guys rock!
Anonymous
12/20/15, 6:08 PM
Edlam first I want to say you are a great writer and I am a big fan. But I think we may have pushed you too hard to deliver something quick. To be honest this chapter was just meh for me. I have no problem with the bullying or incest but it's true that this comes off feeling a bit sad. Why are you not having the re-educator being used constantly. The whole premise of this story is based on it and it's almost completely forgotten about in this chapter. Also who cares about that blow job if he wasn't mind controlled to do it. I could read a story about a whiny fag giving a blow job to his brother anywhere it's pretty common. This chapter just seems to go nowhere. Please understand that I really love your work and I'm only giving my humble opinion but this chapter was boring and not sexy and I know you are capable of so much better. Once again I really am a big fan and hope you can appreciate the constructive feedback.
Anonymous
12/20/15, 5:41 PM
I dont mind the incest (and if you add the father, thats awesome) but... all the bully stuff its just too much for me, its really sad...