Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/20/15, 3:01 AM
I'm sad this is the last chapter.. I really would love to hear more of this.
EdIam
12/20/15, 2:12 AM
Ok, your patience will pay off soon, my friends! The Chapter has been sent to the proof readers. Should be posted tonight or tomorrow, depending upon how quickly I hear back from them! So now you can't blame me if it takes more time, lol, IT'S NOT ON ME ANYMORE!!!
Anonymous
12/20/15, 1:18 AM
Great story. Willie please check out the "remote control daddy" story. Please take that story and make it better. Or at least try to make a story with the same trama (son controling his father)
Anonymous
12/20/15, 1:16 AM
I agree too, willie should edit and continue this story. But im not agree with the idea of jason and yoshida becoming robots, i agree with the idea where jason and yoshida make another blond their remote control (and maybe use the machine of cyrus friend to become) and fight to bring back his father as his slave
Anonymous
12/20/15, 1:16 AM
I agree too, willie should edit and continue this story. But im not agree with the idea of jason and yoshida becoming robots, i agree with the idea where jason and yoshida make another blond their remote control (and maybe use the machine of cyrus friend to become) and fight to bring back his father as his slave
Anonymous
12/19/15, 11:58 PM
I feel like something is missing... also kinda sad since Jake had always got feeling for Steve and now he control him with even his consent
Anonymous
12/19/15, 10:35 PM
Dear Ed, Well I think [so far] you have been working on the most discussed story this year... I would guess that although few gay readers will admit it [ and in real life it is shunned ], just the 'idea' of Bullying turns more than a few bros on...especially being bullied by a hot faggot hater [homophobic] type...Also we all love the straight to gay aspects coming from a formally 'church-going' type...I for one hope Alex screw's up the whole family, one by one, turning the lot of them into the most disfunctional, sex-crazed,'low-life' bunch of pervert's he can imagine ...the 'hot' part will be how each of them rationalizes their new behavior & actions....As one of the former comments remarked.."it's the very un -P.C. aspects of the story that make it as exciting" When Alex is through with them they should be 'the next-door neighbors from hell' that no one except Alex or another pervert would want anything to do with !.........IT'S SATURDAY THE 19th,,WHERE'S CHAPTER 5 !!!!!!
EdIam
12/19/15, 10:16 PM
I'm touched by the excitement over my work! I'm currently sitting down and working out the kinks of chapter 5. I just had VERY little down time this week as I was on vacation. The fact that you all keep coming back and wanting the continuation so badly is keeping me locked in front of my computer, haha. I hope to get it up this weekend some time. I'm finishing the kinks and then I'm sending it to my two proof readers. I warned them yesterday that I should be sending it some time today so hopefully they'll send their feedback quickly and I can get the story up some time tonight!! Thanks, everyone, for making me feel so fantastic with your amazing feedback. As always, feel free to e-mail me any questions or requests to ed.edwards105@gmail.com
Anonymous
12/19/15, 9:38 PM
I'm sure the author appreciates the excitement for a new chapter. But thanks for your input useless internet troll.
Anonymous
12/19/15, 9:25 PM
So...are you the patron? Does the author get paid for this work?