Recent Comments

EdIam
12/19/15, 10:16 PM
I'm touched by the excitement over my work! I'm currently sitting down and working out the kinks of chapter 5. I just had VERY little down time this week as I was on vacation. The fact that you all keep coming back and wanting the continuation so badly is keeping me locked in front of my computer, haha. I hope to get it up this weekend some time. I'm finishing the kinks and then I'm sending it to my two proof readers. I warned them yesterday that I should be sending it some time today so hopefully they'll send their feedback quickly and I can get the story up some time tonight!! Thanks, everyone, for making me feel so fantastic with your amazing feedback. As always, feel free to e-mail me any questions or requests to ed.edwards105@gmail.com
Anonymous
12/19/15, 9:38 PM
I'm sure the author appreciates the excitement for a new chapter. But thanks for your input useless internet troll.
Anonymous
12/19/15, 9:25 PM
So...are you the patron? Does the author get paid for this work?
Anonymous
12/19/15, 8:04 PM
Why are you torturing us with this long wait for the next chapter??? Is this supposed to be a kind of interactive part of the story? Like deep down we are all jake... It's working and it's unbearable!!
Anonymous
12/19/15, 6:39 PM
I agree that willi should clean this up It has great potential Especially if Cyrus arranges for the father to hook his son and buddy up to remote also
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
12/19/15, 5:12 PM
As always, honest to god hypnosis is so hot -- and performing in trance on a webcam really gets me going! Great story!
Anonymous
12/19/15, 1:52 PM
Hot stuff
suitedsubmissive
12/19/15, 1:45 PM
I cannot wait, Sir!
Anonymous
12/19/15, 8:15 AM
I loved it, the control over the coaches was supreme and kinky, thanks for this!
Anonymous
12/19/15, 5:30 AM
Need to spend some time editing. Drafting and crafting is one part. Editing makes the final product readable. This was poorly rendered.