Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/19/15, 11:58 PM
I feel like something is missing... also kinda sad since Jake had always got feeling for Steve and now he control him with even his consent
Anonymous
12/19/15, 10:35 PM
Dear Ed, Well I think [so far] you have been working on the most discussed story this year... I would guess that although few gay readers will admit it [ and in real life it is shunned ], just the 'idea' of Bullying turns more than a few bros on...especially being bullied by a hot faggot hater [homophobic] type...Also we all love the straight to gay aspects coming from a formally 'church-going' type...I for one hope Alex screw's up the whole family, one by one, turning the lot of them into the most disfunctional, sex-crazed,'low-life' bunch of pervert's he can imagine ...the 'hot' part will be how each of them rationalizes their new behavior & actions....As one of the former comments remarked.."it's the very un -P.C. aspects of the story that make it as exciting" When Alex is through with them they should be 'the next-door neighbors from hell' that no one except Alex or another pervert would want anything to do with !.........IT'S SATURDAY THE 19th,,WHERE'S CHAPTER 5 !!!!!!
EdIam
12/19/15, 10:16 PM
I'm touched by the excitement over my work! I'm currently sitting down and working out the kinks of chapter 5. I just had VERY little down time this week as I was on vacation. The fact that you all keep coming back and wanting the continuation so badly is keeping me locked in front of my computer, haha. I hope to get it up this weekend some time. I'm finishing the kinks and then I'm sending it to my two proof readers. I warned them yesterday that I should be sending it some time today so hopefully they'll send their feedback quickly and I can get the story up some time tonight!! Thanks, everyone, for making me feel so fantastic with your amazing feedback. As always, feel free to e-mail me any questions or requests to ed.edwards105@gmail.com
Anonymous
12/19/15, 9:38 PM
I'm sure the author appreciates the excitement for a new chapter. But thanks for your input useless internet troll.
Anonymous
12/19/15, 9:25 PM
So...are you the patron? Does the author get paid for this work?
Anonymous
12/19/15, 8:04 PM
Why are you torturing us with this long wait for the next chapter??? Is this supposed to be a kind of interactive part of the story? Like deep down we are all jake... It's working and it's unbearable!!
Anonymous
12/19/15, 6:39 PM
I agree that willi should clean this up It has great potential Especially if Cyrus arranges for the father to hook his son and buddy up to remote also
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
12/19/15, 5:12 PM
As always, honest to god hypnosis is so hot -- and performing in trance on a webcam really gets me going! Great story!
Anonymous
12/19/15, 1:52 PM
Hot stuff
suitedsubmissive
12/19/15, 1:45 PM
I cannot wait, Sir!