Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/19/15, 9:25 PM
So...are you the patron? Does the author get paid for this work?
Anonymous
12/19/15, 8:04 PM
Why are you torturing us with this long wait for the next chapter??? Is this supposed to be a kind of interactive part of the story? Like deep down we are all jake... It's working and it's unbearable!!
Anonymous
12/19/15, 6:39 PM
I agree that willi should clean this up It has great potential Especially if Cyrus arranges for the father to hook his son and buddy up to remote also
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
12/19/15, 5:12 PM
As always, honest to god hypnosis is so hot -- and performing in trance on a webcam really gets me going! Great story!
Anonymous
12/19/15, 1:52 PM
Hot stuff
suitedsubmissive
12/19/15, 1:45 PM
I cannot wait, Sir!
Anonymous
12/19/15, 8:15 AM
I loved it, the control over the coaches was supreme and kinky, thanks for this!
Anonymous
12/19/15, 5:30 AM
Need to spend some time editing. Drafting and crafting is one part. Editing makes the final product readable. This was poorly rendered.
Anonymous
12/19/15, 5:25 AM
Great story!!! Loved it.
Anonymous
12/18/15, 11:19 PM
Agree with most of the comments. I think this story should not have ended. It has potential to keep going. I would like if Willie Cici continues the story.