Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/19/15, 5:25 AM
Great story!!! Loved it.
Anonymous
12/18/15, 11:19 PM
Agree with most of the comments. I think this story should not have ended. It has potential to keep going. I would like if Willie Cici continues the story.
Anonymous
12/18/15, 9:04 PM
Good trama. I really dont know yet if the end you post was the best or not. Personally, i see many differents scenarios. Like 1) if Jason has continude just as a robot by control remote (maybe toby and yoshida will make another robot to fight against cyrus to bring back jason) 2) Continue the story and see how jason start joining his friends as a slave to cambyses 3) a mix of both (continue the story and when toby and yoshida notice that jason is now cyrus's slave try to bring him back and search for another robot (and maybe they can use the technology cambyses use to become the slave conscious)) These are just my ideas to continue the story. (As a detail..... i like the stereotype of blonde as dumb)
Anonymous
12/18/15, 7:59 PM
Even the probelms from adapting, it is a good story. I searched for the original to know if it as other parts. Unfourtunate it doesn't, but in spite of that, i will be greatful if someone can make a continue of this story :)
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
12/18/15, 6:31 PM
The pleasant dilemma for a slave: "As for Jason a part of him blame Cyrus for turning him into a slave but most of her enjoys being obedient and loyal and loving towards him." And with the right programming, we each happily make the choice Cyrus made and know where our true satisfaction lies.
Slavebehr
12/18/15, 5:40 PM
Awesome story Sir thank you, great character development from beginning to end. If the were only true flex would make millions and the world would be a much better place with leather and rubber men walking about.
Larry
12/18/15, 4:54 PM
Great story, but massive pronoun trouble
EdIam
12/18/15, 3:46 PM
Sorry, everyone!! My vacation has been insanely busy. I was out and about most of the time. I have gotten a lot of Chapter 5 worked on while here, but after heading home tonight, I can really assess where I'm at and carry on the story with the quality I owe you all! Thanks so much for your patience, everyone! Alex will begin terrorizing the poor Hendersons again very soon!
Editor
12/18/15, 2:09 PM
Some continuity problems from adapting it have come through like the pony tail and the few female pronouns try to ignore
Anonymous
12/18/15, 10:40 AM
Who is Lucas?