Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/14/15, 10:39 PM
EDLAM : PLEASE BRING ON CHAPTER 5..MY COCK IS DRIPPING PRE-CUM IN ANTICIPATION !!!...LOVE A GOOD 'HOT' & MANLY BULLY !!!
suitedsubmissive
12/14/15, 9:28 PM
I hope we get to read more of your story soon, Sir
Mar 12, 2015
Edbehr
12/14/15, 4:25 PM
Awesome story told from the first person as he was living it. Thanks and I am looking forward to his other adventures as a muscle pig
RobinHood70
12/14/15, 7:40 AM
Max: if you want harem building, try my stories (http://www.gayspiralstories.com/author/show/2565). Note that when this site went through it's transition a couple of months ago, I stopped publishing here, so Chapter 7 is only on mcstories.com for now.
Anonymous
12/14/15, 3:07 AM
edlam i read your other story and its just as great as this one,good luck with your finals!:D keep writing
Anonymous
12/14/15, 2:03 AM
Hello Dreamer. Will there be a new chapter soon?
Anonymous
12/14/15, 1:50 AM
Since Alex hates how much of a nerd his neighbour is, would have sense if he brainwashes Jake to make him adopt extreme nerdy features on his look: thick glasses, hunched posture, stuttering, lack of personal care, lack of character, wimpiness, nasal voice, disinterest on clothing... you know, a horrible nerd stereotype disgrace! Seeing that his brother is such cartoonish nerd surely would would encourage JJ's desire to be a bully!
Gary of San Francisco
12/13/15, 11:46 PM
'meen' is right-on, the 'new JJ' is a real improvement now that he's starting to act like a real man : Even though he's gay, he should take on the attitude's of a homophobic faggot hater...[after-all, this is just fiction & one of the things I love about the story so far is that it's not more 'politically correct' bullshit ! ....but I personally don't agree with the 'sex slaves' comment. There's enough slave & master fiction out there already...Edlam, just keep Alex fucking with everyone's brain's & let us see what's in their heads to rationalize their new behavior...Lets see how 'fucked-up' this 'christian family' can become when their changed by a psycho like Alex !!!
EdIam
12/13/15, 9:28 PM
Hey guys!! Just thought I'd drop a quick line and let you know I'm safely in Chicago. Had a great time last night...doing.......stuff. And having a nice relaxing afternoon at my buddy's place. Working a little on Chapter 5 and hopefully should get the finishing touches on it tomorrow during the day. LOVE the e-mails I've been getting, guys. Feel free to keep dropping me some suggestions, pics of how you see the guys, and any other questions you have. Love being accessible to all of you. Thanks again for your amazing reaction!!
meen
12/13/15, 7:18 PM
I love new jj he's so hot and sexy. humiliation jake But I want to end jake to the dark side, revenge Alex And Alex jj become sex slaves.