Recent Comments

alx62
12/12/15, 10:29 PM
me next please as I so need this to happen
Gary of San Francisco
12/12/15, 10:05 PM
Edlam, have a great holiday !...your newly devoted fan, Gary
EdIam
12/12/15, 7:16 PM
Please ignore my misspellings and grammatical errors...using the iPhone for commenting and I'm too excited to proofread! haha
EdIam
12/12/15, 7:14 PM
Heading to the airport soon, my friends! Very excited to arrive, get settled, and relax by writing a bit more. I'm glad I can include aspects of so many of your interests to keep the story sexy for so many! Ive gotten some wonderful emails I think all of you have indicated different scenes and aspects as you're favorites! I've still got some exciting ideas I want to get written down ASAP. Hopefully I keep you all satisfied with the developments to come! I'll keep an eye on my email and on comments here at the site while traveling! Thanks again, everyone!
Gary of San Francisco
12/12/15, 7:06 PM
It's just interesting that as 'readers' we're all so different. I can respect that you find the 'invisibility' so exciting, while I felt that was the weakest part. To me, the idea of the mind control & having the characters act completely different [ and being so 'clueless'] was a more exciting aspect of the plot. The invisibility reminded me more of stories dealing with magic & witchcraft, etc. It somehow took away from the 'science'/ mind control-machine idea's of the story, but as I say: to each his own. It's great that we're all enjoying the story this much !
Anonymous
12/12/15, 6:31 PM
Very hot! I hope the office boy Chris turns out to have a huge cock and makes Mike his bitch as payback.
Anonymous
12/12/15, 5:27 PM
But I think the most interesting part is still Alex's invisibility. The humiliation part is like, measuring up to my expectations, but those Alex's fondling JJ's bodies' plots, amazing and sexy! Please don't let this kind of creative and alluring style of playing die in the future chapters. Based on the question from the last post, we can assume that probably Jake doesn't see Alex, and when the two brothers are arguing, Alex is also playing with his two toys, too? Delicious!
Anonymous
12/12/15, 12:46 PM
When's the next part?
Anonymous
12/12/15, 5:12 AM
Jake walking in, is he going to be able to see Alex since he wasn't there when Alex said daddy's home or just JJ doing the motions?
Gary of San Francisco
12/12/15, 4:01 AM
Thank you Edlam, I never thought I'd get a personal response from the author...Wow Your really on my wave-length, I love stories where people are transformed into the exact opposite of what they were, [& always for the 'sexy-worst' !!!] You have really got into the mind of these guys & shown us how they tick. It's great how the 'good' brother is changing into a complete bully [& I hope a real ass-hole] It would nice to see thing's from Alex's perspective via the 'new' J.J...These things only work when the macho bully convinces himself that he's right & anyone who doesn't see things his way is FUCKING WRONG !..[he was such a fucking goody two shoe's , there should still be lots to CORRECT, making him the meanest bully we can think of.......