Recent Comments

EdIam
12/12/15, 7:14 PM
Heading to the airport soon, my friends! Very excited to arrive, get settled, and relax by writing a bit more. I'm glad I can include aspects of so many of your interests to keep the story sexy for so many! Ive gotten some wonderful emails I think all of you have indicated different scenes and aspects as you're favorites! I've still got some exciting ideas I want to get written down ASAP. Hopefully I keep you all satisfied with the developments to come! I'll keep an eye on my email and on comments here at the site while traveling! Thanks again, everyone!
Gary of San Francisco
12/12/15, 7:06 PM
It's just interesting that as 'readers' we're all so different. I can respect that you find the 'invisibility' so exciting, while I felt that was the weakest part. To me, the idea of the mind control & having the characters act completely different [ and being so 'clueless'] was a more exciting aspect of the plot. The invisibility reminded me more of stories dealing with magic & witchcraft, etc. It somehow took away from the 'science'/ mind control-machine idea's of the story, but as I say: to each his own. It's great that we're all enjoying the story this much !
Anonymous
12/12/15, 6:31 PM
Very hot! I hope the office boy Chris turns out to have a huge cock and makes Mike his bitch as payback.
Anonymous
12/12/15, 5:27 PM
But I think the most interesting part is still Alex's invisibility. The humiliation part is like, measuring up to my expectations, but those Alex's fondling JJ's bodies' plots, amazing and sexy! Please don't let this kind of creative and alluring style of playing die in the future chapters. Based on the question from the last post, we can assume that probably Jake doesn't see Alex, and when the two brothers are arguing, Alex is also playing with his two toys, too? Delicious!
Anonymous
12/12/15, 12:46 PM
When's the next part?
Anonymous
12/12/15, 5:12 AM
Jake walking in, is he going to be able to see Alex since he wasn't there when Alex said daddy's home or just JJ doing the motions?
Gary of San Francisco
12/12/15, 4:01 AM
Thank you Edlam, I never thought I'd get a personal response from the author...Wow Your really on my wave-length, I love stories where people are transformed into the exact opposite of what they were, [& always for the 'sexy-worst' !!!] You have really got into the mind of these guys & shown us how they tick. It's great how the 'good' brother is changing into a complete bully [& I hope a real ass-hole] It would nice to see thing's from Alex's perspective via the 'new' J.J...These things only work when the macho bully convinces himself that he's right & anyone who doesn't see things his way is FUCKING WRONG !..[he was such a fucking goody two shoe's , there should still be lots to CORRECT, making him the meanest bully we can think of.......
EdIam
12/12/15, 2:53 AM
Thanks, Gary!! I just want to write a story I know I'd like to read. I'm glad to get such an amazing reaction! Working on Chapter 5 now. And, for all that may have missed it, if you want to e-mail me any questions, I'm ed.edwards105@gmail.com You guys are making me feel pretty confident in my writing! Thanks for all the support! Can't wait to get the next chapter out for you all!
Gary of San Francisco
12/12/15, 2:40 AM
Dear Edlam : what a great un-P.C story...We see nothing but anti-bulling stuff in the gay press, but this is total fiction & I for one find it VERY EXCITING to see the world TOTALLY from the point of view of a REAL BULLY & and ONE WHO REALLY CARES NOTHING for those around him ! I agree with the other comment, I practically shot a load over jj's change after his shower..We need a lot more of the NEW JJ & what he's thinking as well as doing. Whatever the 'reader' thinks of his actions, Him & Alex should be on the same wave length,[ both feeling they are always right & everything they do is for their pleasure & fuck what anyone thinks! Of course Alex can change what any thinks or disapproves of just by using the re-educator to make his behavior & ideas, theirs!! A real sick bully like Alex wouldn't think twice, figuring he was ALWAYS RIGHT & it was the other folks minds that needed readjustment !SO REMEMBER...KEEP IT UP WE READERS WANT TO SEE MORE & MORE BULLYING IN THIS HOUSEHOLD...I have a feeling that 'poor Jake' is in for a lot more as everyone including himself starts to consider him a 'filthy queer' & treat him as such !!!
bleuboy
12/12/15, 2:39 AM
I don't know if you mind this or not, but I copied the story down and edited it immensely. Would you like to see what I did with it?