Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/14/15, 2:03 AM
Hello Dreamer. Will there be a new chapter soon?
Anonymous
12/14/15, 1:50 AM
Since Alex hates how much of a nerd his neighbour is, would have sense if he brainwashes Jake to make him adopt extreme nerdy features on his look: thick glasses, hunched posture, stuttering, lack of personal care, lack of character, wimpiness, nasal voice, disinterest on clothing... you know, a horrible nerd stereotype disgrace! Seeing that his brother is such cartoonish nerd surely would would encourage JJ's desire to be a bully!
Gary of San Francisco
12/13/15, 11:46 PM
'meen' is right-on, the 'new JJ' is a real improvement now that he's starting to act like a real man : Even though he's gay, he should take on the attitude's of a homophobic faggot hater...[after-all, this is just fiction & one of the things I love about the story so far is that it's not more 'politically correct' bullshit ! ....but I personally don't agree with the 'sex slaves' comment. There's enough slave & master fiction out there already...Edlam, just keep Alex fucking with everyone's brain's & let us see what's in their heads to rationalize their new behavior...Lets see how 'fucked-up' this 'christian family' can become when their changed by a psycho like Alex !!!
EdIam
12/13/15, 9:28 PM
Hey guys!! Just thought I'd drop a quick line and let you know I'm safely in Chicago. Had a great time last night...doing.......stuff. And having a nice relaxing afternoon at my buddy's place. Working a little on Chapter 5 and hopefully should get the finishing touches on it tomorrow during the day. LOVE the e-mails I've been getting, guys. Feel free to keep dropping me some suggestions, pics of how you see the guys, and any other questions you have. Love being accessible to all of you. Thanks again for your amazing reaction!!
meen
12/13/15, 7:18 PM
I love new jj he's so hot and sexy. humiliation jake But I want to end jake to the dark side, revenge Alex And Alex jj become sex slaves.
Anonymous
12/13/15, 11:27 AM
Will there be another chapter?
Dec 9, 2015
Anonymous
12/13/15, 8:26 AM
It was posted on Nifty earlier.
tomozco
12/13/15, 6:09 AM
Thanks everyone for the comments so far! I'm glad so many of you are enjoying my fantasies as well. I'm still working on the next installment, but just don't always find enough time to sit down and write it all out at once. It's slowly but surely coming along...so stay tuned! Thanks again!!!
alx62
12/13/15, 1:00 AM
excellent would love to be a guard in that prison
Dec 9, 2015
Anonymous
12/13/15, 12:42 AM
Sure I've read this before somewhere...