Recent Comments

Gary of San Francisco
12/12/15, 2:40 AM
Dear Edlam : what a great un-P.C story...We see nothing but anti-bulling stuff in the gay press, but this is total fiction & I for one find it VERY EXCITING to see the world TOTALLY from the point of view of a REAL BULLY & and ONE WHO REALLY CARES NOTHING for those around him ! I agree with the other comment, I practically shot a load over jj's change after his shower..We need a lot more of the NEW JJ & what he's thinking as well as doing. Whatever the 'reader' thinks of his actions, Him & Alex should be on the same wave length,[ both feeling they are always right & everything they do is for their pleasure & fuck what anyone thinks! Of course Alex can change what any thinks or disapproves of just by using the re-educator to make his behavior & ideas, theirs!! A real sick bully like Alex wouldn't think twice, figuring he was ALWAYS RIGHT & it was the other folks minds that needed readjustment !SO REMEMBER...KEEP IT UP WE READERS WANT TO SEE MORE & MORE BULLYING IN THIS HOUSEHOLD...I have a feeling that 'poor Jake' is in for a lot more as everyone including himself starts to consider him a 'filthy queer' & treat him as such !!!
bleuboy
12/12/15, 2:39 AM
I don't know if you mind this or not, but I copied the story down and edited it immensely. Would you like to see what I did with it?
EdIam
12/12/15, 2:24 AM
So, what I was trying to say, I think it's hot that Alex really INSTANTLY took what was his with a thoroughly willing JJ...especially considering JJ was a virginal Christian up to the point Alex fucked with his personality. Not only did he not think twice about sucking his cock, he wanted it DESPERATELY. But, on a side note, thanks for the well wishes for finals!! Passed them all with flying colors! Felt amazing! Thanks for the support, everyone! Off to Chicago for some much needed rest/relaxation/sex!! :D
EdIam
12/12/15, 1:46 AM
I'm so happy my story has caused so much discussion! In my mind (and penis) the idea that Alex could so quickly and effectively change JJ's sexual expression, needs, and desires is a huge part of the story. I think for Alex, who I've expressed to have already been promiscuous prior to his re-educated gayness, it makes sense to finally have some kind of sex with his fully controlled thrall. He'd contained it for as long as could but needed to let out. He may not be as generous as time goes on, however.
Anonymous
12/12/15, 12:43 AM
I AGREE WITH BOTH YOU GUY'S. THE HOTTEST PART OF THE CHAPTER & THE STORY AS A WHOLE IS HOW J.J. CHANGED AFTER HIS SHOWER, HIS WHOLE BEHAVIOR CHANGE WAS VERY EXCITING. I CAN SEE WHERE THE MORE OF A BULLY HE BECOMES, THE MORE 'MANLY' HE ACTS & FEELS. I ALSO THOUGHT THE SEX SCENE WAS THE WEAKEST PART, MORE LIKE EVERY OTHER GAY SEX STORY. HOPE WE GET A LOT MORE J.J. & PERHAPS GET INTO SOME 'FETISH' STUFF : TIGHT JEANS, LEATHER, SHOWING-OFF IN & OUT OF TIGHT CLOTHS. LATER-ON IF THE WRITER IS INTO IT, PISS [SCAT ?], ALL THAT HEAVY STUFF......
Anonymous
12/12/15, 12:15 AM
'slavethruhypno' is right on, it's time Alex got back to work on Jake, turning him into the total worthless faggot Alex thought he was anyway, but it's important that the author takes us into Jake's brain, so we can get off on seeing how he processes the changes to real 'fagdom'! Also. he's still a little to smart: wouldn't Alex want to 'dumb him down' a bit? Not make him stupid , but just 'low' average ,more like the way his brother now see's him ? I also really like the Bullying theme's and find them very exciting. The best part of the story has been when J.J. gets out of the shower & thinks about his brother, becoming a 'new man'. I loved the 'new' way he talked and related to Jake. We need a lot more of this. Actually, I thought the weakest part was the heavy sex at the chapters end. Alex should have played a little more 'hard-to-get', which would have caused J.J. to react even more toward Jake to impress Alex [ and remember he's been 'programmed' to become more and more of a bully.]
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
12/11/15, 11:46 PM
Love that Jake is being shown what a fag he really is. He will soon accept it and sink down to the level he belongs at. It is a good place to be when one accepts the truth about oneself.
Anonymous
12/11/15, 11:44 PM
Hope Eric saves the day, sometime in late 2016 or 2017. In the meantime give us lots of chapters. You still have to re-educate the ex girlfriend to get rid of her once & for all..[isn't she out shopping with the mother ?] A real sociopath like Alex would have a little fun changing her when she returns..probably making her into a total sick nympho before sending on her way and he's going to have his hand's full in dealing with the mother now that her son's are so different from when she left in the morning...Then we come to the Dad. I can't wait to see what the author comes up with for him !
Anonymous
12/11/15, 11:05 PM
Please make jj as much of a sociopath as his mentor Alex, it's very exciting !
Anonymous
12/11/15, 11:03 PM
THIS LAST POST IS 'RIGHT-ON'..THIS IS OBVIOUSLY A BULLY & HUMILIATION STORY & MORE POWER TO THE AUTHOR..[But please don't fall into the trap of so many of these stories: NO SLAVES & MASTERS, PLEASE !! It's enough to call a man 'Sir' as a sign of respect....] LOVE IT WHEN A RE-EDUCATED BULLY LIKE JJ STARTS TO REALLY FEEL HIS 'POWER' & SHOWS IT IN THE WAY HE ACT'S, DRESS'ES MOVES, USES FOUL LANGUAGE & RELATES IN A TOTALLY 'SUPERIOR' MANNER TO OTHERS !