Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/11/15, 8:30 PM
Make Eric come to rescue? Well, then where shall the story go? Jake suddenly decides to play Alex?! No way. Pls. I think it will probably be better if Alex has first played happily for a long time with his slaves, be it Jake, Eric, JJ, Dad, policemen, coaches, soldiers, or gangsters. And then it's our turn to expect a twist plot for the end of the story :)
little'tiny'tim20@gmail.com
12/11/15, 7:13 PM
LOVE ALL THE BULLYING OF JAKE BY JJ...MORE PLEASE : CAN'T WAIT TO SEE HOW JJ TRY'S TO IMPRESS ALEX BY BULLYING JAKE IN FRONT OF HIM & LOVE HOW YOU WRITE ABOUT JJ'S NEW 'FEELING'S'...ONLY WISH ALEX WOULD USE THE RE EDUCATOR TO GIVE JAKE BACK HIS FORMER [RE EDUCATED] FEELINGS FOR ALEX AS WELL & RE EDUCATE HIM TO BELIEVE HE DESERVES TO BE TREATED IN THIS MANNER & START ACTING LIKE THE 'FILTHY QUEER',WIMP,ETC. HIS BROTHER & ALEX ARE CALLING HIM !...KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK..MORE BULLYING !!!!
JamieTi684
12/11/15, 6:53 PM
Hope Eric saves the day too. Good luck with finals Edlam, we're all rooting for you!
Anonymous
12/11/15, 6:13 PM
I would love for Eric to come in and rescue Jake from Alex and set things right.
Anonymous
12/11/15, 5:36 PM
Agreed best friend needs to make everything right, but I am liking the plot, I didn't think I would, kinda made me sad, but now it's hot. Good luck with finals
EdIam
12/11/15, 2:35 PM
Might be a bit of a wait for Chapter 5, everyone. Final exam today, some fun with friends, and off to Chicago for vacation tomorrow. May have some downtime this evening to work on it, but I didn't want to leave you all without the first major sex scene! Hope to get the next one out soon!
Anonymous
12/11/15, 2:32 PM
Whoever posted the comment before me is right,I want eric to swoop in and save the say and give alex a taste of his own medicine
Mar 13, 2014
kerbear
12/11/15, 11:55 AM
The story has great possibilities and yes there are some mistakes but they can be fixed. Please keep working on it.
Johan
12/11/15, 8:47 AM
Agree 100% with the previous speaker!! Chapter 4, where are you??? :D :D :D
Anonymous
12/11/15, 8:02 AM
This story is fantastic so far!