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garyrichard
12/15/15, 12:46 AM
i want some to where can get?
garyrichard
12/15/15, 12:35 AM
i wish iwas him mmmmm master
Anonymous
12/14/15, 10:39 PM
EDLAM : PLEASE BRING ON CHAPTER 5..MY COCK IS DRIPPING PRE-CUM IN ANTICIPATION !!!...LOVE A GOOD 'HOT' & MANLY BULLY !!!
suitedsubmissive
12/14/15, 9:28 PM
I hope we get to read more of your story soon, Sir
Mar 12, 2015
Edbehr
12/14/15, 4:25 PM
Awesome story told from the first person as he was living it. Thanks and I am looking forward to his other adventures as a muscle pig
RobinHood70
12/14/15, 7:40 AM
Max: if you want harem building, try my stories (http://www.gayspiralstories.com/author/show/2565). Note that when this site went through it's transition a couple of months ago, I stopped publishing here, so Chapter 7 is only on mcstories.com for now.
Anonymous
12/14/15, 3:07 AM
edlam i read your other story and its just as great as this one,good luck with your finals!:D keep writing
Anonymous
12/14/15, 2:03 AM
Hello Dreamer. Will there be a new chapter soon?
Anonymous
12/14/15, 1:50 AM
Since Alex hates how much of a nerd his neighbour is, would have sense if he brainwashes Jake to make him adopt extreme nerdy features on his look: thick glasses, hunched posture, stuttering, lack of personal care, lack of character, wimpiness, nasal voice, disinterest on clothing... you know, a horrible nerd stereotype disgrace! Seeing that his brother is such cartoonish nerd surely would would encourage JJ's desire to be a bully!
Gary of San Francisco
12/13/15, 11:46 PM
'meen' is right-on, the 'new JJ' is a real improvement now that he's starting to act like a real man : Even though he's gay, he should take on the attitude's of a homophobic faggot hater...[after-all, this is just fiction & one of the things I love about the story so far is that it's not more 'politically correct' bullshit ! ....but I personally don't agree with the 'sex slaves' comment. There's enough slave & master fiction out there already...Edlam, just keep Alex fucking with everyone's brain's & let us see what's in their heads to rationalize their new behavior...Lets see how 'fucked-up' this 'christian family' can become when their changed by a psycho like Alex !!!