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8/11/24, 6:47 AM
I knew the Welsh were aliens! ;)

Willie Cici
8/11/24, 8:05 PM
@[scudder](/user/show/43145) It's a running joke of my stories. There's something about the language especially when you mix it in with English that makes it funny.
Anonymous
8/11/24, 7:43 PM
I really hope another chapter is in the works!
4/3/23, 3:16 PM
The Story to me is quite alright, but in my opinion it does not really have a mind control, or brainwashing element. it feels like a submissive and a dominant, coming into their own, style story. I am used to a more magical or fantasy type of control. This is just a little too real for me, I am an artist and a submissive in a BDSM relationship in real life so I didn't get the escape from reality I like when I read this story. But it is well written, and I like where it is going. Just don't let Oliver try and change Matt's career path, and goals in life, that is not something a "loving" dominant should ever do, Oliver should instead enhance his submissive, and use his talents, not try to remove them. Also I think You should take it as a compliment that You have inspired a conversation. That just means that Your writing is emotional and moving.

4/3/23, 3:43 PM
@[SteamPup](/user/show/10001188) Hahaha thank you, thinking about it this way does make me feel better :sweat_smile:

8/11/24, 7:42 PM
@[formalboy](/user/show/10030609) I agree with SteamPup. i would think that Dom/sub relationships evolve in their own time and way depending on the individuals involved. Matt was not coerced by any forceful means. He is slowly accepting this shift because he wanted to make Oliver happy. Anonymous apparently just wasn't into any kind of influence he felt was even the least bit manipulative. So maybe he wouldn't feel comfortable with the kind of relationship Oliver and Matt have and are evolving. That's fine. To each his own. That's why i think if one wants a Dom/sub or Master/servant relationship it's so important to have a good "connection" from the start so you already know you each want to move in the same or similar directions. Personally i also agree with SteamPup about preferring stories with a stronger sense of more forcefully manipulated power exchange. I like the fantasy!
8/11/24, 6:35 PM
It’s ok should be over soon
8/11/24, 6:13 PM
Nice story. You should do a story about mind control/hypnosis.
8/11/24, 6:01 PM
Wow. This took a twist. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
8/11/24, 4:10 PM
Never a cuck myself, but a definite parallel in how I started smoking at the insistence of a smoking Alpha 20 years ago. Fantastic story!
naturellementsoumis
8/10/24, 1:47 PM
What a wonderful story. I loved the mindfucking and reprogrammation of Jack. That was wonderful to read. Thank YOU !

8/11/24, 3:30 PM
@naturellementsoumis Thank you so much!
8/11/24, 1:43 PM
This was excellent
8/11/24, 1:11 PM
Damn. Jealous of a fictional character. Great job man, we need more sub top stuff around here.