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Anonymous
12/10/15, 6:44 AM
Well... I will keep reading your novels during your vacation... a good author needs a good vacation... so good luck!
Anonymous
12/10/15, 6:38 AM
Edlam do you have an email that people could contact you at?
EdIam
12/10/15, 6:37 AM
Hey guys! Just a quick update. I'd say I'm nearly finished with Chapter 4 and already know where I'm going with the next few chapters. Problem is, I have finals tomorrow and Friday and then I go on vacation to Chicago for the next week. I'll probably have some downtime during the vacation to really focus on the story but no promises. Hopefully all of you keep your interest as the steadiness of chapters will decline slightly for a little while!
Anonymous
12/10/15, 6:35 AM
So good but such s tease! Continue continue continue!!!!!!!!!!
Anonymous
12/10/15, 6:09 AM
Amazing! You know what? The most arousing part is Alex's invisibility! What on earth can that be extended to? Like a time-stop machine? Can Alex from now on fondle everyone's body to his content without their notice? Or like a reality-changing machine? Can Alex from now on change everyone's gestures easily and freely, again no one notices? Or since Alex is still there having the control, he can make a normal chat between people weirder? Oh my! Edlam master, pls tell me how many more slaves will Alex scheme to have in the future! For example, if Alex goes to a police station, and there the hunk chief is having an investigation with a red-headed hunk gang leader... and there are several bouncers/officers there as well. And Alex's invisible interruption to these hunks' positions, minds.... oh, my! Can't even wait to see more! Or am I just too sensitive?
Anonymous
12/10/15, 5:48 AM
Really well done so far...though it would be nice to see some karma in the end. ;)
Anonymous
12/10/15, 5:32 AM
Please more. There is still the grandfather and the frat to go Sir
Anonymous
12/10/15, 5:04 AM
Interesting start!!
Anonymous
12/10/15, 4:09 AM
Corrupting someone's personality is deliciously hot...can't wait for the next section!
EdIam
12/10/15, 4:06 AM
Alex had the earplugs in his ears the whole time. The way I view them, and I guess it's just kind of suspension of belief, is that they allow sound through, so the person speaking can still hear. They just block the specific sound-wave the Re-Educator emits so it can't program people wearing them. At the end, Alex directed specific commands to each brother so each one ignored the commands for the other.