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Anonymous
12/10/15, 6:35 AM
So good but such s tease! Continue continue continue!!!!!!!!!!
Anonymous
12/10/15, 6:09 AM
Amazing! You know what? The most arousing part is Alex's invisibility! What on earth can that be extended to? Like a time-stop machine? Can Alex from now on fondle everyone's body to his content without their notice? Or like a reality-changing machine? Can Alex from now on change everyone's gestures easily and freely, again no one notices? Or since Alex is still there having the control, he can make a normal chat between people weirder? Oh my! Edlam master, pls tell me how many more slaves will Alex scheme to have in the future! For example, if Alex goes to a police station, and there the hunk chief is having an investigation with a red-headed hunk gang leader... and there are several bouncers/officers there as well. And Alex's invisible interruption to these hunks' positions, minds.... oh, my! Can't even wait to see more! Or am I just too sensitive?
Anonymous
12/10/15, 5:48 AM
Really well done so far...though it would be nice to see some karma in the end. ;)
Anonymous
12/10/15, 5:32 AM
Please more. There is still the grandfather and the frat to go Sir
Anonymous
12/10/15, 5:04 AM
Interesting start!!
Anonymous
12/10/15, 4:09 AM
Corrupting someone's personality is deliciously hot...can't wait for the next section!
EdIam
12/10/15, 4:06 AM
Alex had the earplugs in his ears the whole time. The way I view them, and I guess it's just kind of suspension of belief, is that they allow sound through, so the person speaking can still hear. They just block the specific sound-wave the Re-Educator emits so it can't program people wearing them. At the end, Alex directed specific commands to each brother so each one ignored the commands for the other.
Anonymous
12/10/15, 4:02 AM
This is still hot but unless I missed it did the earplugs get in jj s ears And is Alex somehow programmed too
littletinytim20@gmail.com
12/10/15, 3:58 AM
This is getting good. I'm so glad Alex has turned J.J. into a bully ! This is just what I was hoping for...I hope over the next few day's he becomes more & more cruel to his brother the queer...Now that he's gay, this behavior should really turn him on. I'm also glad he's now in love with Alex..[here's hoping Alex changes the mom & dad so that they also 'admire' him & consider him one of the family...the son they wish they had had :strong, manly [& in their eyes, not the faggot both their son's had become]..The father should really bond with Alex, but he should be re-educated to become a cruel homo-hating, hard drinking, dirty talking[even women hating] 'real-man', proud of his gym toned body, showing it off in tight cloths..always calling attention to his big dick,etc. Even though the father no longer shows her any affection, the mother should 'worship' him for his 'manliness', the crueler he is the more she likes him, but she can no longer stand her two son's because they are faggot's: to her, the lowest of the low. Little does she know that Alex has turned her macho husband into a closet homo ! No one in the house should be awaire of the 're-educator, no longer knowing what it can or has done....Now that Jake no longer knows he invented it, it's time to 'dumb him down a little, [the smart brother becoming the slightly low i.q. boy who has trouble remembering 'stuff', but is perfectly happy being "the dumb one" He should rely on his one true friend Alex to make up his mind for him. Also he should become more & more 'self-hating' knowing that he is a filthy queer & deserves to be treated as one !......I still think it would be fun, if J.J.'s going to be gay, but 'butch' to make the younger brother the complete steriotype of a 'sissy' faggot..make him believe that he has always been bullyed by everyone for the way he is & has always been : limp wristed, lisping, mincing, panty wearing..ashamed of his 'little' pee pee, [which he considers more of a clit]....all features which would make his father hate him more, but with re-education he would feel were his natural way..... Then you could get into the way's the family dynamic would start to change: nude behavior , public jacking off & cock sucking around the house, lots of drinking & swearing & general crude behavior, the complete oposite of their former church going/god fearing behavior!! & all of it directed by Alex !...As you can tell, I'm really into this story & hope it continues for many chapters, but close toghther...CAN'T WAIT !!!!
EdIam
12/10/15, 3:53 AM
But ya read Chapter 3 to see what happens, so I've obviously done something right :P