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EdIam
12/10/15, 3:53 AM
But ya read Chapter 3 to see what happens, so I've obviously done something right :P
Anonymous
12/10/15, 3:51 AM
Gotta admit, after the fabulous build up of chapter 1, the wonderful entry into Jake's personal life - chapter 2 is really upsetting and is a total turn off. Brainy though he may be, Jake wasn't smart enough to turn Alex into a living vegetable who's constantly in pain and whose only escape will be a well-deserved suicide.
EdIam
12/10/15, 2:58 AM
I'm a little blown away by it myself! It's been a little pet project for about a month but didn't really think about submitting it until a few days ago when my buddy told me he liked it a lot. I'll keep focused and work on this one...and, no worries, I have plans for the ending :P
Ethan
12/10/15, 2:37 AM
wow,when i read chapter one this is not how i expected this top go,but this is so hot,keep going please :)
alx62
12/10/15, 1:11 AM
Lucky Paul were can I find such a man to serve?
a1
12/10/15, 1:03 AM
so great
Anonymous
12/10/15, 1:00 AM
I've never seen such a reaction to a story before...everyone wants a happy ending, me too, but wow, you really captured the audience
Johan
12/9/15, 11:33 PM
I would prefer to have already the chapter 3 with lots of grammatical mistakes than waiting this long :) You can do as many authors here do that they upload later on a "revised" version of the story.. and everyone will be happy :D
littletinytim20@gmail.com
12/9/15, 11:15 PM
The most excitement I'v seen around a story in some time : Looks like there's room for many 'chapters' here..Can't wait to see how Alex changes J,J when he comes downstairs..[it's obvious from the way thing's are going that he's going to turn him gay], but wouldn't it be hot if instead of 'loving his younger brother Jake, as he had in the past, he now considers Alex, more like a brother, looks up to him, wants to be just like him...[& Alex reprograms J.J's mind] so he thinks he's always been a 'bully' to his younger brother, but more than this Eric should expect this kind of treatment, & feel he deserves it & craves it. As a matter of fact the whole family should 'look-down' on Eric, being ashamed of him, etc....Perhaps Eric should totally forget that he ever invented the re-educator at all. Alex could start to 'dumb-down' Eric & make him think he was never bright enough to have gone to college at all, instead he'd come home after being fired from his job as a janitor at the college, etc [???]....His family could even be re-programed to feel he was never their 'birth-son' at all, but a baby they had brought home from the shelter when his real mother a crack-whore couldn't take care of him...This would open up the door's to all kinds of 'hatred' & mistreatment on the part of his former Mother. Father & Brother !
Anonymous
12/9/15, 10:33 PM
Wow lots of comments that usually means great story The writer has his work cut out From both story and comments I'm on edge how it should proceed Lots of possibilities One thing I caught was Alex getting hard at end Was he exposed to re educate Does he go Dark and control father and jj too Or is there a hidden twist for Alex his brothers and dad Getting hard thinking how it should end can't wait