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littletinytim20@gmail.com
12/9/15, 1:32 AM
A hot story, but too bad Jake was such a moral bro. It was really hot when he changed Eric into a gay guy, but I would have liked him to add more detailed stuff, giving Eric more 'memories' of growing up gay & a more sexual early backround. Also it would have been interesting if Eric forgot his hetrosexual stuff altoghther & actually had not only no interest in girls, but perhaps a little 'fear' or even a slight 'dislike' of them [??]...Jake could have also changed Eric's behavior, manner of dress & other likes & dislikes, etc [like non-smoker into smoker, non drinker into heavy drinker, smart guy into 'dumb' sexual jock, pure spoken into heavy dirty-talking dude, etc]...Sorry my fetishes taking over, just keep it up..good story
Anonymous
12/9/15, 1:23 AM
This is a great start. Reminds me of Webb025's Chet's Chaotic Conquest. Super hot!
Anonymous
12/9/15, 1:06 AM
Sorry forgot to add... Hot story! I'm glad it did take this turn a bit since Jake was obviously not going to do anything FUN but I would personally like to see it turned back with some modifications now
Anonymous
12/9/15, 1:00 AM
I think we all just prefer the gay geek to win in the end... Still amazingly hot. Maybe take away his morals in an attempt to get to use it on JJ only to have the effect of taking away his morals of using it on Alex AND JJ and the cronies
alx62
12/9/15, 12:29 AM
wow doug had me cumming with every transformation another please
EdIam
12/9/15, 12:28 AM
I realize it's only been a couple comments, but I'm surprised at the number of good hearted readers, haha. I have a pretty broad gameplan as of now and have currently started in on chapter 4. I'll try to keep updates regular. And as for your hopes, no promises :P The story will go where it goes.
Anonymous
12/9/15, 12:20 AM
I hope the device gets back in Jake's hands and he is restored to normal and Alex is the one to grovel.
alx62
12/9/15, 12:17 AM
were is this barber I want this
alx62
12/9/15, 12:08 AM
wow were do I sign up for that holiday
Dec 7, 2015
Brody
12/8/15, 11:40 PM
Thanks for the feedback. I really want to start contributing to this new awesome site. They did a great job setting it up. I'm hoping as I tighten my writing skills, proofreading more and getting better acquainted with dialogue, my stories will get better and better