Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/4/15, 6:10 PM
This story is so hot! The part with the powerpoint presentation was excellent, I love Mike's humiliation in that scene. Are you going to make him even dumber? I hope so! The dialogues are very good too, all sounds very natural, and that's hard to get. My favourite line? "That's my girl!" Oh, man, that was SO HOT!
Anonymous
12/4/15, 4:33 PM
Original and hot!! Great combination.
Anonymous
12/4/15, 3:00 PM
Excellent! Would love to see more!
Jamie
12/4/15, 11:15 AM
Amazing! Can't wait to see more!
Anonymous
12/4/15, 7:18 AM
Perfect build! can't wait for more
Anonymous
12/4/15, 6:37 AM
When's part 3 coming?
Anonymous
12/4/15, 6:28 AM
Good start!! Had me reading and interested. Good plot development.
Slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
12/4/15, 5:42 AM
"That's my girl!" -- hot!
Anonymous
12/4/15, 5:15 AM
more please
Anonymous
12/4/15, 4:38 AM
So nice and so much fun! Thanks very much!